tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post2113393085317975242..comments2024-02-02T00:44:30.069+00:00Comments on ....Kodjo Deynoo Poetry (K.D.P) An Impressionist Poet: The Phone CallKodjo Deynoohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-35135451927014421022011-06-13T04:27:40.994+01:002011-06-13T04:27:40.994+01:00oh I enjoyed this one! Such a relief and rush of ...oh I enjoyed this one! Such a relief and rush of excitement, the gift of words and voice over the phone. A gift to see you read this too =) Thanks.Patriciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00991524097486901864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-84807993458710406762011-06-12T19:40:00.557+01:002011-06-12T19:40:00.557+01:00lovely little piece Kodjo, skype is all too quickl...lovely little piece Kodjo, skype is all too quickly replacing the old phone. I kid of miss the intimacy...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-58026985638362679752011-06-12T17:06:38.129+01:002011-06-12T17:06:38.129+01:00thank goodness for phones ...they provide reassura...thank goodness for phones ...they provide reassurance from people far away yet in our hearts,think your poem reflects that longing to know our loved ones are safe and well and by hearing their voices supplies this .Many thanks x xAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10624767707167052328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-82243132458307942292011-06-12T15:37:36.078+01:002011-06-12T15:37:36.078+01:00awww this is so lovely and great to see you readin...awww this is so lovely and great to see you reading it...adds another layer of meaning..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-79815522302554897362011-06-12T13:23:03.448+01:002011-06-12T13:23:03.448+01:00Great transition in the beginning from silence to ...Great transition in the beginning from silence to enlightened discovery. Also like how you build to the shock of that unexpected phone call. Final nice has a lovely ring to it as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-14685906768703962552011-06-12T12:39:53.755+01:002011-06-12T12:39:53.755+01:00"oh my darling I have missed you so"
th..."oh my darling I have missed you so"<br /><br />that line...so simple..so clear...hits hard, right to the soul...<br /><br />Thank you for sharing your words...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-456846109206414852011-06-12T12:17:55.562+01:002011-06-12T12:17:55.562+01:00nice..you capture that longing of speaking to a lo...nice..you capture that longing of speaking to a loved one or family and the feeling it brings when we do...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-46720360061747574822011-06-12T12:15:35.247+01:002011-06-12T12:15:35.247+01:00That call, when it comes, unexpectedly or possibly...That call, when it comes, unexpectedly or possibly hoped for, can be a wonderful thing. Enjoyed reading this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-18109114367011460152011-06-12T12:04:10.315+01:002011-06-12T12:04:10.315+01:00The waiting increases the excitement and relief wh...The waiting increases the excitement and relief when the phone finally rings! Lovely poem!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-18574741658482040652011-06-12T07:51:04.391+01:002011-06-12T07:51:04.391+01:00Lovely piece... you can feel the longing, the desi...Lovely piece... you can feel the longing, the desire building like the crescendo of the bell... the excitement of the connection.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.com