tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post4757971880173096522..comments2024-02-02T00:44:30.069+00:00Comments on ....Kodjo Deynoo Poetry (K.D.P) An Impressionist Poet: Othello OthelloKodjo Deynoohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-51734504992324339442012-10-09T03:46:03.775+01:002012-10-09T03:46:03.775+01:00I would like to know Othello's answer, if any....I would like to know Othello's answer, if any...<br />Very original take on the prompt, excellent rhythm all through your poem.<br />My favourite lines:<br /><b>"...winds change directions <br />That is why the weather man finds it hard, <br />As noble men do, to have a sound reputation"</b><br />(no comma after <i>weather man</i>, I think, but after <i>hard</i>).<br /><br /><br />Dulcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804606583762933316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-14342108254279341612012-10-06T05:02:41.495+01:002012-10-06T05:02:41.495+01:00Nice play on a great Shakespeare story. Othello, ...Nice play on a great Shakespeare story. Othello, Othello may not have kept the foundation together. I just love the whole flow of your poem.<br /><br />Happy Theme Thursday and a great Foundation poem.<br /><br />God bless.Mrsupolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01563854387767106508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-84981212917731255922012-10-06T04:58:10.991+01:002012-10-06T04:58:10.991+01:00great take on the prompt and fabulous rhythm!great take on the prompt and fabulous rhythm!my heart's love songshttp://myheartslovesongs.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-47824199815854918222012-10-04T12:04:39.661+01:002012-10-04T12:04:39.661+01:00Very well written!Very well written!Sayantinihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01726797349113010237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-81588044064256225482012-10-03T13:00:29.033+01:002012-10-03T13:00:29.033+01:00Very good, clever... rhythmic X here from #OctPoWr...Very good, clever... rhythmic X here from #OctPoWriMo XShah Whartonhttp://shahscribbles.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-14957660144532523322012-10-02T23:06:33.368+01:002012-10-02T23:06:33.368+01:00Othello, Othello.... being an actor , primarily on...Othello, Othello.... being an actor , primarily on stage, naturally your words and your inquiry delight me. Love the rhythm and tempo.Julie Jordan Scotthttp://www.juliejordanscott.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-23907519710898853232012-10-02T18:09:54.400+01:002012-10-02T18:09:54.400+01:00Bravo!! Bravo!! Linda Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11285985403444531922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-58511094855924229082012-10-02T16:19:04.542+01:002012-10-02T16:19:04.542+01:00Yeah, fortune telling is trickery. Well done, here...Yeah, fortune telling is trickery. Well done, here.Shaunahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15279846999053851468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-29530194157845887812012-10-02T14:56:33.615+01:002012-10-02T14:56:33.615+01:00oh, very well done!oh, very well done!Susan Danielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13241514922366571247noreply@blogger.com