tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post6034459248480720215..comments2024-02-02T00:44:30.069+00:00Comments on ....Kodjo Deynoo Poetry (K.D.P) An Impressionist Poet: Pledges MadeKodjo Deynoohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-64980122358182250892011-09-17T19:27:33.925+01:002011-09-17T19:27:33.925+01:00You’ve got superb talent in creative writing,
Keep...You’ve got superb talent in creative writing,<br />Keep it up.<br /><br />Please check out short story slam week 10 prompt today.<br /><br />It is great to write and entertain our children,<br />Don’t you agree?<br /><br />Give it a try,<br />Let your beautiful imagination fly.<br /><br />Best.<br />Happy Autumn!<br />xoxoxBluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-30184154493451791072011-09-17T19:27:21.617+01:002011-09-17T19:27:21.617+01:00This is so precious piece.This is so precious piece.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-24949773460384811422011-01-09T23:01:31.717+00:002011-01-09T23:01:31.717+00:00This is my way of staying clear
Off titanic faith...This is my way of staying clear<br />Off titanic faithless, I have to make it<br />Of iceberg I stay clear off, "I try to"<br />Unwanted troubles, they spiral,<br />Many beneath waters "unseen"<br /><br />so many beneath waters "unseen" ... all any of us can do is try.<br /><br />Beautiful!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-22419871581465394232011-01-09T17:27:30.110+00:002011-01-09T17:27:30.110+00:00oops, sorry "of"oops, sorry "of"... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-20062278832705414412011-01-09T17:27:08.927+00:002011-01-09T17:27:08.927+00:00'this is the pledge ob my honor'
a supe...'this is the pledge ob my honor'<br /><br /><br /> a super last line... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-1262772931155824722011-01-09T17:26:28.611+00:002011-01-09T17:26:28.611+00:00I am swimming, floating, holding onto faith...to m...I am swimming, floating, holding onto faith...to make it through the red midst - Great intro and ending lines that sum up the details in between very nicely. Good take on the photo - your verse plays well with the image.Sheilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06541409754494611831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-11209069329219246362011-01-09T15:28:07.601+00:002011-01-09T15:28:07.601+00:00'unwanted troubles, they spiral' so true, ...'unwanted troubles, they spiral' so true, stay clear!! I enjoyed this...and thought provoking :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-73406652473371487552011-01-09T15:08:44.952+00:002011-01-09T15:08:44.952+00:00The Waters always invite mystery and deeper though...The Waters always invite mystery and deeper thoughts and questions don't they? You hit it here.Jerryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04874006676004790578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-84459082604053272722011-01-09T14:37:31.707+00:002011-01-09T14:37:31.707+00:00i absolutely love how you start this..For now I am...i absolutely love how you start this..For now I am just trying.. makes a great entry to take the reader on this path of questions and thoughts..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-55474397430981120892011-01-09T13:26:56.294+00:002011-01-09T13:26:56.294+00:00this is such a wonderfully crafted piece.. good ta...this is such a wonderfully crafted piece.. good take!Priyanka Bhowmickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11658819351312019129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-60795656678203030222011-01-09T13:21:06.023+00:002011-01-09T13:21:06.023+00:00Trying to keep my head above water. I think we are...Trying to keep my head above water. I think we are all trying to keep our heads above water. Nice poem. Gigi Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08092019687497845746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3202258275944899875.post-91542715598072736502011-01-09T12:41:25.432+00:002011-01-09T12:41:25.432+00:00Shore line / Spells my saving grace / Fearful it s...Shore line / Spells my saving grace / Fearful it stands / In the foot steps of mirage, "I pray not"<br /><br />Great sense of rhythm to your lines that works well with the questioning, sense of spiritual journey aspect of your poem. Way to respond to the challenge, Kodjo!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com