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Saturday, 8 May 2010

I See Allure


I see with sight, in sight..
What words can not distort, 

Or disfigure in sugar coats,...
Of  the sweet or sour;..
With sight, in impact, 
Stunned in reactions felt..


A strong reaction that is..
In feeling's passion, ..
And  passionate tear drops trickle..
That which I can not deny..


Demanded by concern, ..
Conscious, conscience to act..
Painting a vivid image in my memory box..
Of flash lights, in flash back's quiver..

I see with eyes, in sight..
Light years, before I reach..
In sight, what words ..
Can not describe in marvel..

Left with an understanding..
Overwhelmed by emotional trigger..
On instincts trail..
A smile in sign language..


For still no words can describe..
What beauty beholds eyes, 
In sight seen, in capture

And I am left with aurora's ecstasy ..
A warm touch, in my heart's allure..
Oh, I do, I do have a soft spot for the eye..

Sight seen on painting
Brash strokes
On canvas walls  
Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 06:29
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10 comments:

  1. ms pie14 March 2011 at 00:00

    how interesting.. what the eye sees,seeing everything...

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  2. SandyCarlson14 March 2011 at 02:08

    Beautiful, sensuous, visual. Thanks.

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  3. Madeleine Begun Kane14 March 2011 at 06:01

    Lovely verse!

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  4. Tammie Lee15 March 2011 at 17:14

    wonderfully mysterious and creative.

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  5. Brian Miller15 August 2011 at 15:29

    nice...breash strokes on the wall are evocative of those reactions you speak of...nicely done...

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  6. Helen15 August 2011 at 16:27

    I see a passionate Magpie .. love it!!

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  7. Berowne15 August 2011 at 17:36

    Yes, there are vivid images in all our memory boxes...

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  8. Kristen Haskell15 August 2011 at 22:17

    Demanded by concern, ..
    Conscious, conscience to act..
    Painting a vivid image in my memory box..
    Of flash lights, in flash back's quiver..

    This piece hit home with me. All I can say is wow.

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  9. Jenne' R. Andrews 15 August 2011 at 23:01

    I like the brush strokes-- it's hard to write in abstractions, but you have done a very nice job of writing a thought-provoking poem-- xxxj

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  10. hyperCRYPTICal17 August 2011 at 14:42

    I do so like this - bravo!

    Anna :o]

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