I wanna be, just like you..
When I grow up, just like you..
When I wake up, just like you..
When I say words, just like you..
With so much confidence, just like you
I wanna walk, just like you,..
A slight bend to the left, just like you,..
I wanna be, just like you,..
Just as popular, just like you
When people look, just like you..
When I go stunting, just like you,..
When I am loved, just like you..
Like a legacy to be had..
My ambition progressions stand..
In the mirror, just like you..
Hey look,..
I am looking at you..
Just like you, looking at me..
I mean; nah you, me looking at you..
Nah me looking at me, you in the mirror..
Just like you, just like me..
Me, you just like me...
I am the man in the mirror
To have noticed me
Picture By :http://www.smileto.ca/index.php?showimage=169
Looking into the mirror can be both illuminating and confusing sometimes. Happy One Shot! Glad you signed up.
ReplyDeletelike that one!
ReplyDeletefirst i thought it's about a boy who wants to be like his father or his big brother…but then...
That Narcissistic turn towards the end was clever. Nice One Shot!
ReplyDeletei like that..and i like the photo..great piece..cheers pete
ReplyDeleteI love the swivel in this poem. I'm looking behind me in front back again.
ReplyDeleteWhere can I look? Up???
Nice one for One shot - thanks
Moon smiles
I like mirrors. It reflects that. Obviously! :D
ReplyDeleteI am happy to be a part of One Shot Wednesday!
Here is what I offer:
commas in the pauses
Also you too are welcome to get aboard the Poetry Train on Monday mornings!
Thank you for adding a link back to my site for the photograph =)
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