Terms and condition
Should eventualities manifest
These are the said words, should in case
In conditions, such deeds are set upon
The law man;
Your honor, your honor
Your honor, your honor
Always plays the wise man's game
Trying to out smart, the smart ones
You smarty pants
You see,
In legal fees, ones to the lawyer man, paid
When I set my terms, conditions do follow
Then it becomes a pin pong ball rally
Of his terms, my terms, his terms
As it goes,
Two lawyers in-between clients
Sat on legal fees, and fine shoes
His terms, my terms, his terms
Conditions do follow, "legal fees"
Smarty pants,
Then he said, for your legal fees
Lets see, how far he will take it
Lets call his bluff, I am thinking
I think it is a bluff
That's it!, yep he said,
If elephants can do yoga,
On balancing balls, you did be ok
I think it is a bluff
That's it!, yep he said,
If elephants can do yoga,
On balancing balls, you did be ok
For your legal fees
It hangs in the balance, my friend
I will have to prepare you,
For eventualities, with consultation
Sounds like a familiar ring of
More legal fees, smarty pants
More legal fees?
Terms and conditions
Why did I not become a lawyer
It hangs in the balance, my friend
I will have to prepare you,
For eventualities, with consultation
Sounds like a familiar ring of
More legal fees, smarty pants
More legal fees?
Terms and conditions
Why did I not become a lawyer
Very well crafted..!! I quite agree with this myself
ReplyDeletekeep Writing My Dear.. :)
interesting...I like the flow and the words gripped me. this form of poetry has always intrigued me. I am not a critic but I think you have a talent that the rest of us strive for.
ReplyDeleteInteresting, and yes, balance is key.
ReplyDeleteThe picture got me from the start. Ha
ReplyDeleteYou deal with the balance so well - well legal things can't balance as well as the elephant.
Your flow was excellent as well
We appreciate having your excellent work each week at One Shot
Thanks from MDW
That is a marvelous metaphor, and makes me recall meeting with a lawyer and how I felt about it. Ugh. Nice writing, Kodjo
ReplyDeleteA very interesting topic and how nicely written.
ReplyDeleteI too loved the picture...)
Wysteria
love the originality of your work...sometimes I hear to a rhythm like a song....love the smarty pants....thank you...bkm
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the flow of this poem and like bkm I love the smarty pants. Thank you for sharing
ReplyDeleteThis is an interesting piece. I too love the smarty pants... Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteI think the only reasons legal fees exist are to pay the high-priced lawyers and judges, and to keep the system from becoming too clogged-up.
ReplyDeleteNice One Shot, Kodjo!
Clever, creative. Loved reading it, different! Thanks for the visit to my blog!
ReplyDeleteit hangs in the balance my friend - so cool - your poem is for sure well balanced - great write!
ReplyDeleteClever, metaphorical piece, great - if inevitable, sadly - finish.
ReplyDeleteAhaa... witty, and darned clever!! Loved the analogy!
ReplyDeleteIt's all but a game .. a game where one keeps paying and paying thru' the nose! Paying for the guilt, for the innocence...for everything!
I see emotions laid out very masterfully in this piece... a WOW One Shot, Kodjo!!!
smart words....
ReplyDeletekeep up the excellence.
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