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With the keys of hope, any door of doubt that stands in our way can be unlocked to belief... Cheers.
ReplyDeleteThank you.. :) This is a beautiful piece and has retained the beauty and message of the original.
Awesome way to unlock!, twist and turn,. nicce :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting concept... :)
ReplyDeleteWhen waves transport to the new shore
Very interesting haiku!
ReplyDeleteoh this is like answers to many pessimist thoughts wow amazingly simple haiku yet has a sea deep meaning :) lovely!
ReplyDeletelove the message of hope - nothing in life is truly hidden from us if we do the work to open the 'locks'..well-done
ReplyDelete...key...twists turns ~ great metaphor for life ~ wonderful haiku ~ thanks, ^_^
ReplyDeleteYes ..very true ..Interesting:)
ReplyDeleteLove ~ in shape of lock
Very true :)
ReplyDeleteNice to allow dreams and hopes out to the world! Good write.
ReplyDeleteHope is the key! Loved it! :)
ReplyDeleteSimple and so clear
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