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Such a creative take on the prompt. I so much loved the metaphor of the "stage"
ReplyDeleteThe arresting introductory line is beautifully answered with the dynamic metaphor in the last line! Loved this haiku!
ReplyDeletevery creative, 'On maps of new lights'. refreshingly nice!
ReplyDeletePerpetual Dusk
Wow. Well penned.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a beautiful haiku... and the photo is excellent too. :-)
ReplyDeleteMine is here: http://positivekismet.blogspot.com/2013/01/musings-haiku-small-stones-at-dusk.html
Eliz
Great 'curtains before dawn' is inspired x
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