Sometimes, a thousand good wishes..
Are ruined by, just the one thing..
One step, one word, said wrong..
And prayers are like
Water falls on rocks..
In empty barren lands..
Forgive me Father for I have sinned..
Decades in passing, in blink of eyes..
Not sure when, I last sat in the booth..
To announce my confessions
To announce my confessions
And my face shall not be shown..
For the priest will be scarred by it..
And the priest shall need counselling there after..
And the counsellors will retire with exhaustion..
Yet word for word, me to you..
To the average man compared..
I am in with the better half of goodness..
A few good men left..
Compromises and boundaries, principals..
To be moved to make up for the numbers..
And on Sundays..
I leave my daily custom of Caesar's..
To be worn after, I have given to God..
Bless me Father for I have sin..
And sin awaits me like Bonny awaits Clyde..
Gluttony, Pride, Envy, Sloth, Lust
Wrapped around Wrath to end with Greed
But I am in with
The better half of goodness..
Wrapped around Wrath to end with Greed
But I am in with
The better half of goodness..
A few good men left, I am..
Very beautifully written poem.. What a flow!!
ReplyDeleteWell done with the sins.. sinfully poetic My Dear.. :D
You are indeed a good man Kodjo Dear!! xoxox
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/sinfully-me/
:) nice..
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed. Cheers :)
ReplyDeleteWarm regards
Luke @ WordSalad
You very artfully packed all the sins into one short poem. Nicely done. Always appreciate economy with words
regards
Luke @ WordSalad
ps lovely background... I'll hunt for this blog theme...
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/10/14/abscond/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/08/19/communication/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/06/26/257/
oops above I pasted another poet's comments on also! Please disregard the second comment (as I can't seem to delete it now)
ReplyDeleteThanks my friend
Luke
lovely Sunday confession,
ReplyDeletebeautiful job.
Thanks for sharing.
Kodjo, my first visit to your blog. Wonderfully written poem...an experience that jars my memory. Good man.
ReplyDeleteVictoria
Excellent. You are a real talent
ReplyDeleteA confession all of us shres.. great work, my friend :)
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