That start with a notion
Inscribed on emotion
Pen my ink, with fantasy, day dream
Set my imagination on wishful thinking
Buy a book, write a book, of dairy pages
Plan a plan of scope to see forth
Build my self a prince's castle,
On top of canyon mountain stands
Place a beautiful princess inside
To be my queen, my all, my other half
To fill the canyon's holes, left wide gapped
I want to write a poem of words
Set it out, in hope, in wish, like a prayer
To have my dreams come true to light
While I stand on high, on joy
Over wishful stands on canyons lands,
Where dreams are made to fill this gap
That's what that photo is like - a prayer. Nice one, sir.
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem, indeed... I would say you were successful in this, writing it 'in hope, in wish, like a prayer'.
ReplyDelete"I want to write a poem of words
ReplyDeleteSet it out, in hope, in wish, like a prayer
To have my dreams come true to light"
Lovely sentiments - unique build off of the photo. Such fantastical yet simple longing, with such an image as the backdrop...
Fantastic poem that reminds me of both writing and spirituality. Great work. Creative use of the prompt as well. Cheers
ReplyDeleteVery good poem. You've personalized the metaphor beautifully.
ReplyDeleteI am loving all the different takes on this prompt, this week. Your poem is lovely. I hope all your dreams come true.
ReplyDeleteRomantic and personal, but light and positive, full of the feeling of that open blue sky in the photo. Liked it very much.
ReplyDeletelove it, a prayer in a poem... even just looking at this panoramic is like a prayer - a breath of fresh air providing space for new potentials to come in
ReplyDeleteBreathtaking beauty here.
ReplyDeleteso lovely ~ full of positive ~ and those castles ~ would I be a Princess in one such scene ~
ReplyDeletebeautiful
~ Lib ~
Its so beautiful it brings tears to the eyes..your princess is one lucky woman
ReplyDeleteyour poem speaks directly to the heart :)
ReplyDeletekeep dreaming :)
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cheers from Uruguay :)