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Monday, 29 November 2010

The Guardian of Fire



To be with you is like I am dreaming…
I need you to feel your kiss, your loving…

 Never leave me alone, 
When the World turns against me!...

 Give your hands out as  an extension 
And make me feel secured and free!...


Tease me more when I am past crazy, already…
Nestle me more, when I am almost turning dizzy…

 Agonize me more, when I am already gone…
Love me more; when it seems you can't love any more!


Bare a flower, a white tulip as golden 
And I will know I belong to thee 

 Fix the Sun above, adjust it positions 
That it will shine on us, always and forever.

 I want to feel, it define of 
Each and every colour of the rainbow 

 Guard the fire between us 
So no one can blow it off!

 Be the guardian of our fire! 
The flame of our love 



Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 21:58
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14 comments:

  1. Steve Isaak1 December 2010 at 00:45

    Passionate, welcome piece. Excellent, indelible images.

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  2. dustus1 December 2010 at 01:49

    Second stanza transforms the poem into a roller coaster of a great one shot! Very emotional, honest piece. Cheers, Kodja. Also, appreciate you taking part in the Sunday pic prompts.

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  3. hedgewitch1 December 2010 at 04:53

    Really enjoy your unique style. Every time I come here you paint me pictures and make me think. This one is just full of emotion. Nice piece.

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  4. Shashidhar Sharma2 December 2010 at 14:54

    I enjoyed this one beautiful written one shot... thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  5. Marshy2 December 2010 at 20:35

    a wonderful read...loved this line

    Tease me more when I am past crazy, already…

    thanks for sharing...pete

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  6. gautami tripathy3 December 2010 at 15:44

    Thanks for this one shot!
    retrieval

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  7. Brother Ollie27 January 2011 at 18:01

    This is a song.

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  8. Francis Morilao27 January 2011 at 18:20

    i love it

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  9. Sherry Blue Sky27 January 2011 at 18:52

    Wow, firey and powerfully passionate. Awesome!

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  10. Tanith27 January 2011 at 19:36

    "Tease me more when I am past crazy, already…
    Nestle me more, when I am almost turning dizzy…
    Agonize me more, when I am already gone…"

    I loved these words. They play to my heart. I enjoyed reading this.

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  11. flaubert27 January 2011 at 20:47

    A passionate piece.
    Pamela

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  12. Carrie Van Horn28 January 2011 at 00:40

    You are a true keeper of the flame this is beautifully romantic Kodjo! :-)

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  13. Ella28 January 2011 at 02:31

    I love the idea you chose, protection and love.
    Beautifully written~

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  14. Eileen T O'Neill .....30 January 2011 at 19:19

    An amazingly strong and passionate piece of writing.
    Filled with fire.........

    Eileen

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