On my shoes my canvas worn
On her shoes, her brown hills stood
Jeans and laces entangled is affinity
Shadows of the sun
Sends reflections of our hearts
On wall's projections
Shadows of our hearts
Holds no bound
None so of love
Shadows of our love
Sets us into characters play
Moods, joy, fun of just being
Shadows of our romance
Beneath the surface of what is seen
This is what we truly are
"Shadows of our romance / Beneath the surface of what is seen" Strong final lines built from a progression of prior shadows. Like how you begin focusing on their shoes too——expresses that affinity they share on equal footing so to speak. Great write, Kodjo!
ReplyDeleteTheir shoes being the first thing we see, lovely take on the photo kodjo x
ReplyDelete..beneath the surface of what is seen..this was beautiful
ReplyDeleteshadows of...nice...i like how you capture the moment first then dig deeper...nice take on the prompt...
ReplyDeleteShadows are always good subjects for pondering. good response to the prompt.
ReplyDeleteJeans and lace entangled, I love that line, it so fits the prompt. And the Shadows of our romance, says so much..Lovely poem today KD.
ReplyDeleteShadows can show more than we are willing to admit to ourselves or others...a sure giveaway, kind of like 'toe to toe'
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Love this! ♥
ReplyDelete"Shadows of our romance
ReplyDeleteBeneath the surface of what is seen"
Excellent!
excellent take on the pic !!
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