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Thursday, 19 May 2011

Skinny-dipping hearts



Skinny dipping with my heart
In pools of your love
I went skinny dipping
With a splash, in your pool


Naturist, to have bared it all
Holding back, none on fear nor doubt
Shedding weights I threw my self in
Into your arms to be drenched


And while I drink I  am consumed by you
And while you lay passage in me
Running through veins to my heart
I am at one with you


Closed doors
Have their own stories to tell
That is for your eyes to see, to feel
To attest in emotion's hight


I went skinny dipping 
With my heart
Your pool felt warm 
Connecting with my core


So I  chose to settle in
A home for my heart found
Skinny dipping with my heart
Like a fish in paradise ponds



Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 06:44
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8 comments:

  1. Isabel19 May 2011 at 20:38

    love how you compared being in love with someone to skinny deeping.

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  2. Christine19 May 2011 at 21:55

    Darling sentiments in this poem; I like how the image compliments it. Nice!

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  3. Anonymous20 May 2011 at 14:06

    I enjoyed the analogy "skinny dipping with my heart" lovely

    Enjoy the rally!

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/05/20/the-spirit-of-the-sand-boa/

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  4. Jingle20 May 2011 at 18:53

    playful words.
    well done.

    :)

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  5. Kay21 May 2011 at 10:24

    Delightfully warm and sweet. Thank you!

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  6. Anonymous21 May 2011 at 10:28

    And while I drink I am consumed by you
    And while you lay passage in me
    Running through veins to my heart
    I am at one with you

    I love this stanza beautiful

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  7. debi22 May 2011 at 01:04

    Oh to be able to be that vulnerable...
    You expressed it perfectly.

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  8. Suburban Farm22 May 2011 at 09:52

    This is wonderful. I love your take on skinny-dipping here! The words alone "Skinny dipping with my heart" say so much! Especially love the line "Closed doors have their own stories to tell". Indeed they do! Often it is what is not said or avoided that tells tells the truer story. Love it!

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