Have a listen on soundcloud An incomplete novel
All roses die, consume (d) in rose cottage All beginnings have an ending
And the sun always sets after rise
But I hope it is not the ending
That I have come to know
How could I have blacked out
Just heard a word of the story being told
And knew there was more to it
Did I blink for too long, too long on lament
And missed a chapter to the end to collect
Something went missing, something w' missing
Like the last book of Charles Dickens.
What would the end have been
What would his last words have said
A' would t' villain known to be h' turned out to be hero
All roses die, all beginnings have an ending
This time the author died unannounced with regret
Before last words could have been said to be content
It leaves one with wonder
And others with attempt to rewrite history
What would the story have been.
Some one took a chapter out
And left this book incomplete
And the same was said of Jane Austen
It must be the seasons anger
To have killed a rose before blossom
To say all things die, all things die
Even before chapters end
What is the story being told
Did I miss a chapter
An incomplete novel
Did I miss a chapter
ah....the eternal mystery...like most things in life...chapters edited and made sense with our understanding...and our own villains and edwin droods..
ReplyDeleteif a rose
ReplyDeleteposts her naked body
in a wrong place,
or offer sex to her true love's
offspring to get everything,
then she must be punished.
life is fragile, one shall cherish what one has, not to overdo or harm innocent souls.
truth and creativity makes good poetry! love this!
ReplyDelete~L
Sometimes a chapter does seem skipped over or missed, but it seems to fill itself in with time, great verse.
ReplyDeletesome days i wonder if i missed a chapter somewhere...the pace of the story is so fast it is easy to get lost between sentences you know... nice write kodjo
ReplyDeleteSome one took a chapter out.. and left the book incomplete... I agree with you so much... almost all life is incomplete... Like the story...
ReplyDeleteShashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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I could not stop thinking about how many have died at such a young age and how their story was incomplete. And I wish that everyone's story could be completed before they departed.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this poem with us. Happy TT.
God bless.