Over tea and biscuit
In the comfort of friendship
Here was a story I came to know
Some cuts are deep
Deeper cuts than most
These are lessons I learnt from tales
I read a story about a brave soldier
Who crossed the sea to mainland Europe
To fight the enemy who threatened sanity
This was for a just cause
Where the defined line of good and bad
Was drawn clear on the conscience of soldier's mind
Non the less, through the trenches
Barb-wires and the rain of mortar fire
The sounds that darkens the heavens from day to night
He and men like him that stood on the front line of war gates
Lost how it was to be, once innocent to feel pain, detached
Tears stopped falling, giving way to numbness
While friends he played cards at night with
Laid torn, scatted and without life on muddy grounds.
The next day as causality, to add on, a long list
A name was recorded on the memorial plank
He w' be remembered as a hero a statue would stand
His honor, this was a just war, I say and all agree
No tears would jolt rain on the floor we stand on
There is non left to pour on souls gone
He's was, a life given for a good cause, a just cause
Yet a letter from home, tore alone soldier's dam down
This was a cut too deep to bare, to say two weeks
Had passed to the day his only son died, it read
He fell to his knees, to yell out at breaking point
No war fields, trenches and sight seen
Could numb this surge of pain
The tears he held back for so long, as brave
To maintain composure, could only pour out to flood
"Do not show weakness to the enemy, it dampens moral"
He said forgive me a court martial
My son is dead, dead and gone, while I was away
Fighting for justice, some cuts are just too deep bare
WOW!!
ReplyDeleteTruly moved me.
Brought a lump to my throat.
Brilliantly done.
Thank you so much for taking part.
Warmest regards
Preeti
Amazing! Loved it. :D
ReplyDeleteLoved this write--
ReplyDelete@AudreyHowitt
damn...yeah that would crush me...knowing i was away handling one responsibility while another slipped away...the death of a child too is almost too much to bear...
ReplyDeleteHoly!! Moved my heart. Good one :)
ReplyDeletetruly moving piece made me cry.
ReplyDeleteSuch a sad piece.
ReplyDeletesad and powerful.
ReplyDeleteNice piece. Just found myself a bit distracted by mistakes(but I'm well known for lamenting such things *grin*) Nice use of the words :o)
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