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Saturday, 13 October 2012

3inch Shorter



A length wrapped cloth 
Shorter than my height before 
I shrunk at old age  

Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 08:04
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6 comments:

  1. Chèvrefeuille13 October 2012 at 11:13

    Awesome haiku. With a smile ... we're shrinking before we die.

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  2. Rick.Daddario13 October 2012 at 12:10

    aloha Kodjo - altho "shroud" can be and your haiku is a sensitive subject for some, i think there is also an element of humor in your haiku. I like that. aloha.

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  3. C.S.H13 October 2012 at 16:12

    This made me smile as well! "I shrunk at old age." How funny! But I can relate. When I was 18, I was 5"5" and now I'm 5" 4 1/2" Crazy right?

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  4. Judith Westerfield14 October 2012 at 03:22

    Classic description! I'm still smiling with mirth. (even though my girth has not shrunk with age)

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  5. Amber14 October 2012 at 18:32

    Nice one. The picture catches my attention. :)

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  6. Reading Pleasure15 October 2012 at 12:55

    This is a powerful and well written one, Kodjo.

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