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Showing posts with label Poems. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poems. Show all posts
Saturday, 10 September 2011
Friday, 2 September 2011
Subjective Perspective
A blow with a word strikes deeper
Than a blow with a sword
Words are all we have
Famously, frivolously, chitty chitty
My girl says I make up words
Sometimes I leave it blank, empty head in a room
Meaning, this thing, "this thing" being my favourite line
Fills in the gap on thoughts, of my missing words, read my mind
Ok ok, time out, ours to hold, on hold, I remember word
Lets see, in pictures view
Mirror, mirror, on the dictionary wall of words
To whom is the word, best to behold
This hold adds meaning in definitions expressed
Thesaurus gives options, go on make my day
On words to replace with, then with, them with
Poets like big words, again with confusing conundrums
As if methaphors are not
Hard enough to decipher
So brain works, brain food
Brain storm, tic toc, tic toc, sudoko
You should know by now
Already by now this is me ranting.
But to t' point to be made, by now, on words with words
Chaos and order are two sides of the same coin
So who holds order, ready in exchange for chaos
Curiosity always gets the better of man in exchange
I am heading towards order with word, patience, me love
The thing is, this thing is
Poetry like abstract painting
Needs subjective, perspective, rendition
For the individual to make their own
Mirror, mirror on the wall, this thing, with words
Who is the most beautiful, of them all, to be used "subjective"
Note: if you understood this poem, then you did better than I did
Labels:
Abstract art,
Arts,
Linguistics,
Mirror,
Natural,
Online Writing,
Poems,
Poetry,
Social Sciences,
Sudoku,
Thesaurus,
Word,
Word Games,
Writers Resources
Monday, 29 August 2011
Typos Like A Rush
The feel of face pimple, mountain of topography
A rush of molehills sat firm on the face, picture perfect
Looking back at me in mirrors, does my bump look big
Holds in form the same gravity of annoyance
As typos firmly sat in notes, pee ka boo
Poems and essays written, on thoughts
Steven Fry thus quoting from Oscar Wilde
Thus wanting to make a point, on peek-ka-boo
Once included a note to his publishers
Saying "I will leave you to tidy up the woulds
wants, wouldn'ts and should,
will and shall, should and whiches"
Etc etc etc etc.....on and on and on and on, pee ka boo
I wrote a poem, an epic poem
And got the title all tipsy wrong
A few typos, nicely stack like they belong
Hidden from view, on first read
Second read, third read, blind
Still hidden from view, pee ka boo
Only to stand out like a post
With flag on mountain
On the critics first read
So I ponder with frustration asking questions
Why does such glitches always happen
Not always, sometimes, but too often, sometimes
Sometimes it takes a whole day and more
While typos play pee ka boo, hiding and poking out, bumps
Like a fresh pimple, ready to be popped, squeezed out
Would, for will, there and their
And all the other misfits, misfits
My mind reads over, blank to blind
At least I have
Steven Fry and Oscar Wilde
On my side, looking at the bigger picture
Best have a second read before the critics' read
Just in case, I overlooked another pee ka boo
Misfit, hiding from plain view
Labels:
Arts,
Epic poetry,
Literature,
Oscar Wilde,
Pimple,
Poems,
Proofreading,
Typographical error
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