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In dream state, I found my self The house floats in the heavens
The stars come right down to earth
Not sure, whether I am standing or flying
Lying or falling, dreaming or awaking
Nothing here makes sense, not sure at all
Guess nothing here is meant to
For this is the dream world, the cross roads
The fluid dream I had last night
Sometimes it felt like I was awake
And knew this was a dream, somewhat not so nice
Reasons a' rational objects, the justification given
Then I am lost again, so vivid this feeling
My emotions responds to the stories told
Sometimes I am falling, running, am I still lying in bed, dreaming
In a dream state I found my self last night
When the stars seemed so close
And we were all caught in a whirlpool
Sort of stuck in a nightmare when reality is not what it seems. Great little write here
ReplyDeleteyou managed well to transfer the unreal feeling of the photo into a dream...very nice..and have a lovely sunday kodjo!
ReplyDeleteGreat way to close with the whirlpool sky after pondering the reality between one's mental states. Very nice write, Kodjo.
ReplyDeleteLoved the dangling mystery...just like the photo. Dreams can be very tricky things, can't they?
ReplyDeleteLove it!
ReplyDeletesomeone wake me up please...smiles...ah psycodelic dream my friend.
ReplyDeleteReally deep !
ReplyDeleteI love the dream worlds !
You just described how I feel in some of my dreams.
ReplyDeleteYou captured this picture and the journey our dreams can sometimes take...
ReplyDeleteThis would be an incredible dream and i too would want to feel I was awake...very nice dream...bkm
ReplyDeleteSounds like your dream space is heavenly... would love to be there.
ReplyDeletefrom the first verse to the last, you put the essence of the photograph into words. wonderful.
ReplyDeleteYou captured the unreality perfectly.
ReplyDeleteYes, I have been there in those dreams coming in and out.
ReplyDeleteVery well done..I liked it..you concluded well..
ReplyDeleteinteresting...nice dream!
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