It's amazing, stood in maze fields puzzling
Marvelling, 6 million lives, do maths
And I still found my own, do call it my own
To fit in puzzles of quest,
Click inserted to where it belongs
It's amazing, really do pro-founding
Like finding water wells in the middle of desolation
Deserted by the rains to quench my thirst
I am thirsty, starving shrinking, do thirst
My life line, heart monitor makes sounds
Like blep, blep, blep, drum beats
Food is to feast gauge with do greed
Salt shakers
Excite taste buds, any food, lust
Yum-yum, yummys on belly do full
But for you my life line on tasted aqua
My dry lips shivers for your attention
To become my deity, do worship
Said it's amazing,
Finding needles camouflaged in hay stack
A few trails and errors on quest, do walked
Imitators on first to show hands
Rectangles imitating squares, pentagon do circles
In the end, fruitless, endless tries but truth be told, do tell
On rejected products, standard that are set
Still stands, ISO 9000 and the likes
So it's amazing, really do pro-founding
How it came to be
Bestowed in existence
How quest found the heart's do tender
Shared with: Onestoppoetry http://onestoppoetry.com/
and Magpie Tales http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
Note: I got carried away with the "do" and couldn't do stop
So do read it with the do or without the do, do.. :)
Marvelling, 6 million lives, do maths
And I still found my own, do call it my own
To fit in puzzles of quest,
Click inserted to where it belongs
It's amazing, really do pro-founding
Like finding water wells in the middle of desolation
Deserted by the rains to quench my thirst
I am thirsty, starving shrinking, do thirst
My life line, heart monitor makes sounds
Like blep, blep, blep, drum beats
Food is to feast gauge with do greed
Salt shakers
Excite taste buds, any food, lust
Yum-yum, yummys on belly do full
But for you my life line on tasted aqua
My dry lips shivers for your attention
To become my deity, do worship
Said it's amazing,
Finding needles camouflaged in hay stack
A few trails and errors on quest, do walked
Imitators on first to show hands
Rectangles imitating squares, pentagon do circles
In the end, fruitless, endless tries but truth be told, do tell
On rejected products, standard that are set
Still stands, ISO 9000 and the likes
So it's amazing, really do pro-founding
How it came to be
Bestowed in existence
How quest found the heart's do tender
Shared with: Onestoppoetry http://onestoppoetry.com/
and Magpie Tales http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
Note: I got carried away with the "do" and couldn't do stop
So do read it with the do or without the do, do.. :)
snort...do do...this has some fun flow and rhyme to it...particularly arounf the greed, full, worship stanzas
ReplyDeleteNice one, Kodjo. I love "my dry lips shivers for your attention". Sexy.
ReplyDeleteoohh, very well done. Nice rhythm to this as well.
ReplyDeleteThe picture made me think of Voo Doo
ReplyDeletedelightful my friend you really are multi- talented in your writing.
Thanks for the One Shot
Oh I like the 'do''s Kodjo..
ReplyDeleteWow...wow and wow!! I, for some reason, read code in this!! It reminded of my programming days.. heheh
ReplyDeleteWhile .. (...)
Do... (...)
Loved this poem.. tho "do" at the end of each stanza totally added to the effect, and was like the underlining or highlighting point!! Very original!! Too good!
Do keep writing, my friend.. do do... (you a Nike fan ? ;-))
Hi Kodjo
ReplyDeleteIts beautiful... and I enjoyed it very much.. specially the lines..
'But for you my life line on tasted aqua
My dry lips shivers for your attention
To become my deity, do worship '
Thanks for sharing..
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