Yes, no, No, yes, Adam, Eve
Here, there, There, hereCome, go, Go, come, quick now
Touch me, hold me, squeeze me
No not like that
Hold me, closer, call me, chase meNo not like that
Wine me, dine me, tease me
No not like thatFlowers, roses, candles
No not like that Wait there, right there, ah, right there
Now you doing it rightDoing it right , just there
And you doing it right
Find me, say hi, hug me
No not like that
Write letters, love letters
No not like that
Us together, forever, apples
With denturesSat on the beach
On a moonlight hour
Wait there, right there
Now you doing it right
Doing it right, just there
And you doing it right
Who let the snake in
I want it out
aaaah, out, right now
:) hmm cynical eh Kodjo :)
ReplyDeleteLilting poem and says a lot in simple words and short lines!!
ReplyDeleteSounds like my life mate!
ReplyDeleteLove is a battlefield, but a good one!
ReplyDeleteThe back-and-forth between strengthens the ties that bind us to each other. Interesting piece, Kodjo!
ReplyDeleteI love it. Interesting take on love. The back and forth . Cool poem.
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm of love and how it can be so connected and so aloof. I like you took a different take~
ReplyDeleteThe whole gamut of a relationship caught in a few words. enjoyed it a lot.
ReplyDeleteThe ebb and flow of love through time is a dance all its own. Great take on the prompt...:)
ReplyDeleteLynette
Imagination Lane
It's hard but we all know it's worth it. Good job.
ReplyDeletethat's how we all are born out of the sin.
ReplyDeletegrin.
well done entry.