I Give
I give and on realisation, this brings My joy is shared to give it value
My pain is acknowledged to give it meaning
My love is trusted to give it care
And I am incomplete
Not for want of material things
They have no value
But like the male birds of paradise
I am incomplete until I am seen
I am appreciated
Love holds mirror stands in reflection
And I strive not to disappoint
For it is the look in your eyes
The hardest to stand,
It hurts the most
On disappointment of expectation
The look in your eyes
That shows my joy
And my love is shared to give it value
Hello Kodjo
ReplyDelete'My joy is shared to give it value
My pain is acknowledged to give it meaning'
I like that very much. It is important for things to be noticed and acknowledged.
Thanks very much for leaving your link at I Saw Sunday. It would be great if you could link back there from your post too.
Hope to see you again next week. :-)
Like both the photo and the poem. Thanks for sharing,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Ooh I LOVED this ... deep and just wonderfully written.
ReplyDeletewell explained values in your perspective.
ReplyDeletecheers!
A++
Oh gosh, I loved, loved this. So beautiful
ReplyDeletelovely- very lovely indeed kodjoo.. here's my potluck. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/
ReplyDeleteExcellent write!
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