Save(d) the bell, by the bell, saved by the bell
So many words said like rampage
Run this, you hear this, you heard that
I'm all ears, that's what I am saying now
I am all ears, one shot, here shoot
So teach and lecture, poetry
Desk chair, I'm sat on
Tables in front of me
Finger print pushed on lemons
For lemonade, its a process
Re-stressed, compression
Ready to pen down wisdom
A drink, I drink after, whole cups after
I am thirsty for the know
Intellect, intelligence
Gather like harvest
I'm yearning
Give me the vibe right
The oomph tight
The words bright
But now my patience gauge
Slowly moving to rage
I'm furious, delirious
This is miseducation on misinformation
Rest assured, please believe
You will be fired, through the exit polls
After this, after me, after I, take on the stage
Grab the floor, own the place, make it mine to ride
Raid you off, I'm about to set the stage right
Fast, past mediocrity,
Stamping on egg shell
Flour smoke whisker, like ninja, appearance
You've got me all wound up
Why is this, why is that,
Ovens with half baked cakes
Middles on the sloping ends, served
Now am just fuming
Like steam of the rage train
Hear me, watch me, about to deliver
Projected words, chant hallelujah from wisdom
Note: This is like shaping pencils
Doodling on empty paper, from empty mind
Otherwise known as, scribbling on snakes and ladders
Shared with:http://onestoppoetry.com/
http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com//
And http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
So many words said like rampage
Run this, you hear this, you heard that
I'm all ears, that's what I am saying now
I am all ears, one shot, here shoot
So teach and lecture, poetry
Desk chair, I'm sat on
Tables in front of me
Finger print pushed on lemons
For lemonade, its a process
Re-stressed, compression
Ready to pen down wisdom
A drink, I drink after, whole cups after
I am thirsty for the know
Intellect, intelligence
Gather like harvest
I'm yearning
Give me the vibe right
The oomph tight
The words bright
But now my patience gauge
Slowly moving to rage
I'm furious, delirious
This is miseducation on misinformation
Rest assured, please believe
You will be fired, through the exit polls
After this, after me, after I, take on the stage
Grab the floor, own the place, make it mine to ride
Raid you off, I'm about to set the stage right
Fast, past mediocrity,
Stamping on egg shell
Flour smoke whisker, like ninja, appearance
You've got me all wound up
Why is this, why is that,
Ovens with half baked cakes
Middles on the sloping ends, served
Now am just fuming
Like steam of the rage train
Hear me, watch me, about to deliver
Projected words, chant hallelujah from wisdom
Note: This is like shaping pencils
Doodling on empty paper, from empty mind
Otherwise known as, scribbling on snakes and ladders
Shared with:http://onestoppoetry.com/
http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com//
And http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
"doodling on empty paper" kind of like a free write?
ReplyDeleteanyway, I get your point. I like the phrase "miss-education."
This was quite a ride! Filled with energy and creativity. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness! Felt like a a manic fight of thoughts and ideas. Wow!
ReplyDeletei want some of what you are having...that was fun wasnt it...it sounds fun...nice bit of play...
ReplyDeleteLots of energy in this piece!
ReplyDeleteFlour smoke whisker? I love it!
ReplyDeleteI love how you make your own rules in this poem. It was an absolute pleasure to read, flowed so smooth and said so much, well done.
ReplyDeleteLove this, kind of free verse, rambling, roaming, place to place, all with splendid colors.
ReplyDelete...scribbling on snakes and ladders..smiles..esp. liked..Finger print pushed on lemons
ReplyDeleteFor lemonade, its a process... it is...
Hey Bro,
ReplyDeletefewer words/ and way more juice/ that's what I see/ that's what i deduce.
Tiger
Seriously, if this doodling, then I am already beginning to feel ashamed of what I write (in the name of poetry)...
ReplyDeleteThis was friggin' AWESOME!!
"scribbling on snakes and ladders" -- loved that phrase! You have such a creative mind, Kodjo....
Stay thus, my friend..
Message-intense, focused work.
ReplyDeleteYeah, very cool.
ReplyDeleteHi Kodjo
ReplyDeleteGreat free flow.... and your words like ...
'For lemonade, its a process
Re-stressed, compression '
were true to the process... I enjoyed it
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-winter-dew.html
Twitter @VerseEveryDay
:) I love the beat, the passion, the ride!
ReplyDeleteCheers
Padmavani
Ready to pen down wisdom
ReplyDeleteA drink, I drink after, whole cups after
I am thirsty for the know
Intellect, intelligence
Gather like harvest
this is my favorite stanza... so much energy...nice write...bkm