Dear Life,
Mid way through and its life, this is life, so we here to live it; wake the morning face washed, food, kiss love and ready to face it all. New day, like new beginning, they say its new beginnings, but we here to make right the troubles we left from yesterday's excitement; or at least try to, it is a debt we can't run away from, and sin is just a part of it, and we live with it, like every day's breath breathed, that is why on Sundays, I am quick to queue, on queue, to unload in God's hands, that's me with confessions and prayers.
I pray to God, the week goes, better than before, so am less of sin, in my doing; like not being pushed to corners, and thus forced to cut them, and if you not cheating then you not trying, hard enough, forget winning. So I stand the risk of being caught, Judge faced, to face sentence; am all good though, to know my doing and be ready to pay the price, am all good though.
And this is through winter; spring, sparks, shots of germination, that means we have just made it through the mud, like mad men, mad women, with bruises, with purpose and we poking our heads up, still far from trees, worship-ing the sign, sun to climb higher, another master to serve, on the course.
I drop a verse, for the few who have passed on; it is the pain of growing up, to know more of those, and more becomes of more, as age accumulates. I just heard you gone, that was me, speaking to a ghost in pictures. Albums, flipped he looked so alive, he was so I live with life, last I saw of him.
Anyway, this is "dear life" so we celebrating, Christmas, Halloween, San-la, Hanukkah. Birthdays, Weddings, football, basket ball, matches, Olympics, and just dance; possessed by the music to let loose and be alive; this is dear life, time out on the mountain climb, this is for the celebration, and I just heard you, passed your exams, got promoted, had a boy, a baby girl; you see, that means congratulations are in order, and you have poked another head up, through the mud
This is dear life, a letter I wrote to life; dear life, even though we are in the queens land, let the summer be more than just rain. Winter was long, believe me, winter was so long, so let us worship the sun, another master to serve, before autumn comes, to show winter again.
Yours Faithfully
Kodjo Deynoo
PS: forgive any errors you may find
Very cool, Kodjo. Props for sharing your video. Your thoughts about life resonate with great personal conviction. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful letter to life, catching the man's facial expression and body language - both of which convey joy.
ReplyDeletewow - really enjoyed your take on the prompt...a letter to life..excellent and so cool to hear and see you read it!
ReplyDeletesmiles. wonder if life will write you back...nice on the vid too man, thanks.
ReplyDeleteA good letter to life Kodjo!
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing as if the words were alive..I loved this photo..so glad you chose it and you did a remarkable job to make it walk on its own...thank you...bkm
ReplyDeleteAnd this is through winter, spring, sparks, shots of germination, that means we have just made it through the mud...
ReplyDeleteProse poetry at its best - melodic and meaningful.
I totally loved every word of this, a letter to life, the whole shebang........absolutely pulses with it. A wonderful read!
ReplyDeleteWow...this is quite the leter. I think I'll read it again!
ReplyDeleteGreat job Kodjo. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this, well done! :-)
ReplyDeletesome nice ideas, enjoy the potluck!
ReplyDeletehttp://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/17/the-girl-in-the-corner-so-you-can-remember/
Beautiful reflections on the blessings and challenges of life.
ReplyDeleteLife deserves more like you..as you salute life..it should salute you..very special!
ReplyDeleteFilled with emotion and hope.
ReplyDeleteI just loved this prose poem, Kodjo. The rock of the rhythm of life was vigorous one moment, gentle the next. Even the errors added to the praise of life. After all, we are not perfection. Our lives are full up with errors at one time of another. Perfection is for fools. Striving for perfection isn't. So - not perfect but JUST RIGHT.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool! Life will love you :)
ReplyDeletegreat prose kodjoo.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/
ReplyDeletenice! thanx!
ReplyDeleteLuna
hey i remember this one...smiles. a joy to return to...miss seeing you around at one stop....
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing - loved the hope inspired within.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Beautiful post.
ReplyDeleteRegards!
Divine, charming, and delicious.
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