Should I jump,
Will you catch me mid way through,
Or give me wings, flight
Will you be standing by my side,
Should I jump, should I jump,
If I am to jump
And if I am to knock, knock,
Will opportunity open doors,
Like; hello, hey you, come in,
Take a sit, a drink? am all ears
Should I knock, should I knock
And if am to walk, straight,
No turn on the wrong side,
Keep my head down,
Focus on my set plan
Will a thousand miles, get me there,
Should I walk, should I walk
Will you give me a helping hand
Hold hands, point directions
Like my GPS
Will you be, be my extra
When I just need that push
And stand, in door ways,
Waiting, cheering, is that you
I guess that everyone needs a companion... this journey is too tough to embark on alone.
ReplyDeleteNice poem and photo! :)
ReplyDeleteeveryone needs to stay upbeat.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing such a lovely piece with poets rally.
Hmmm. Thought provoking. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteHappy rallying!
I enjoyed the flow as you began your journey. Thanks for sharing your work.
ReplyDeleteCool poem
ReplyDeleteits like song..where each individual can have her/his own tune.... and the best part it sumhow makes me smile :)
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this! Woot! :)
ReplyDeleteThought-provoking, could be interpreted in several ways... Nice one ;)
ReplyDeleteits enjoyable and has a pleasant rhythm :)
ReplyDeleteyou are very good in this kodjoo! cheers to you! my thursday~ http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/let-it-be-it/
ReplyDeleteI like the questioning quality, and it left me wondering! :) liked it.
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ReplyDeletenice poem with real rhythm and beat and also words we could all use and take on board ..good writing ,thank you.
ReplyDeleteYes, is that you? Must be, a guardian angel who would say, 'jump, walk, knock'....and which will always lead you to happiness, success and contentment...I wish there are guardian angels like that who would always take our hands to the right path!
ReplyDeleteVery nice poem,indeed!
nicely done. we all need that companion to count on.
ReplyDeleteUplifting and easy to relate to - thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteAashi said, it's like a song, in fact I think it would make a great hit song with a nice background tune and few touch ups...awesome job :)
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