I will buy you flowers,
Scent you and serenader you,
To steal your heart, with old romance
Get close to you
Like the need on viewing
Screens on vintage box, analog
To be attached to you, in pairing
Like two head-moulds of clay
His and hers, embraced in permanent state
Close doors, shut curtains
And have you pronouncing
In foreign language
Cheery goes ripe
Pop, on summer's day
I will ignite your bare necessity
Be your yung and line you up
With all the happenings in spring
Bird's love; to pollination
When I kiss can you not tell
The vibration from my heart
That I am so much into you
Wow. So much passion! Love it. 'Screens on vintage box. analog.' Terrific line.
ReplyDeleteRomantic and passionate :) I liked the read, and your tercet forms very nicely!
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lovely gestures and love! :)
ReplyDeleteA lovely love poem!
ReplyDeleteHere is my TT piece:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/04/21/unrelated/
Quite lovely indeed.
ReplyDeleteamazing.......
ReplyDeleteNice, sweet work. Made me smile.
ReplyDeleteKodjo, Lot of great lines here. Well done my friend ...
ReplyDeletelovely.. my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/
ReplyDeleteSo romantic and sensual. Love the way you worked the TV prompt into it in such a clever way!
ReplyDeleteThat is so romantic!
ReplyDeleteaww...just loved it...
ReplyDelete...To be attached to you, in pairing
ReplyDeleteLike two head-moulds of clay
His and hers, embraced in permanent state...
...like how you wrapped these words around that image...nicely done.
Love your imagery for this. A nice, sensual piece. Thanks for sharing, Kodjo.
ReplyDeleteLovely write!
ReplyDeleteWow I can really feel that! I am glad that I finally found the time to hop over from Theme Thursday.
ReplyDeleteLovely imagery, so beautifully romantic :)
ReplyDeleteI do like a poem that goes all the way! Excellent.
ReplyDeletesensual, romantic and sweet. you got it all... love this take...
ReplyDeletehave a great week ahead!
JJRod'z
and have you pronouncing in foreign language...hot...love that...nice piece kodjo
ReplyDelete"steal your heart with old romance." Now THAT's what we tend to forget these days!! Beautiful!
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I enjoyed your Magpie .. also love the sculpture you added!
ReplyDeleteThis felt like old romance to me. Lovely.
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Such a romantic and beautiful poem!!
ReplyDeleteold romance works!
ReplyDeleteKisses with vibrations do it for me! LOL
ReplyDeleteWhen I kiss can you not tell
ReplyDeleteThe vibration from my heart
Beautiful!
This is quite lovely. Great Magpie
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