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Saturday, 31 October 2009

The Way You Sit and Stare



I like the way you sit and stare,
And say, no much 
Just that you do


I like the way, on occasion 
You shake your head and smile
For a joke you share with yourself, by yourself


I like the way you sit and stare,
Saying no much,
Just with a pleasing eye


The way, I like
Your eyes, that twinkle, with a smile
Like a shooting star, brighting the sky


I like the way you sit and stare
Hugs and hold, in squeezes of me
As if, it is the last time ever to do so


But just your way, in feelings drawn
Of saying good morning
All with a smile..


I like the kiss you leave on my lips
A cold refreshing feel, it leaves
Like ice cream on summer's day


I like the way you sit and stare
The way you, look me in the eye
When in saying, I love you, sincerely so, yours


I like the way you call on me
Like a hero to open the jar
Baby, I love the way, you sit and stare, in gaze..


But Most of all, I like the way
You respond to my love
And when I see you, sit and stare


Its an act, worth a thousand words
Like the way 
You sit and stare

18 comments:

  1. Romantic "action not words" piece. Many poets would do well to take an example from you, and dispense with bloat and bombast, and cut to the point, like you have here. (I'm part of three poetry groups. . . it's amazing how ALIKE so much of us are sometimes, myself included.) Superb work, my friend.

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  2. nice....romantic one shot...cant keep their eyes off you...smiles.

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  3. ohhh that is just too romantic, sweet..i believe love is more expressed in actions rather than spoken words..lovely one shot here! :)

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  4. Very tender poem. Nicely written.

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  5. Whatever woman scoops you up will be extremely fortunate. I would say lucky but luck suggests she had or has nothing to do with it. Nice One Shot.Love and Light, Sender

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  6. IF SOMEBODY SITS AND STARES AT YOU THAT WAY ... love IS BEYOND LIMITS... I wish I had the patience to do so with my beloved.
    great one shot
    Love this blog
    ;)
    D.

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  7. Sounds like there is something special to her stare, and must say ice cream is amazing in summer. lol Can relate to your poem. Nice One Shot!

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  8. Kodjo: That is the epitome of Romance
    What way with words

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moon Smiles

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  9. Lovely One Shot - lyrical with well chosen words

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  10. Words to warm a woman up just to enjoy her refreshing kisses. Well written. Thanks, Gay @beachanny

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  11. I Enjoyed reading this one... Kodjo... thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  12. Love this! Word choice, recurring phrases, sense of love...Really wonderful piece. =3

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  13. Beautiful; words are just meaningless if they stand alone, far greater the beauty, if they are show...excellent writing much enjoyed! ~April

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  14. ah - this is beautiful and romantic..
    my fav line...Like ice cream on summer's day...mmmhhhh..nice

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  15. So lovely. Undivided attention that comes just from sitting and staring is priceless.

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  16. I think Moondust has it... utterly romantic, my friend. I believe my heart may have just melted like ice cream on a summer's day.

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  17. i kinda wondered if the date of the poem was significant? a great one shot..cheers pete

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