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Thursday, 8 August 2013

Urban life (easy now)


Rush chaotic sounds 
Polluted lights, speed walks walks 
Concrete jungle, stress

We use to live on 
Trees now we live on concrete 
Trees suited monkeys 

 Civilization 
Who is laughing now I ask 
Ha ha ha ha ha

Gosh, I just dropped  
My dentures on the floor here, here
Help me look for it
Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 10:42
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7 comments:

  1. Sumana Roy8 August 2013 at 19:11


    two connected pictures........well expressed.

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  2. Brian Miller3 September 2013 at 21:18

    ha yes we are just suited monkeys now in the concrete jungle...smiles...rather funny close too man....

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  3. Anonymous4 September 2013 at 00:08

    Yikes! It is very difficult to be alive in the modern world that is certain. A mordant wit here. k.

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  4. Mary4 September 2013 at 00:33

    Sometimes 'civilization' sure is hard to figure!!

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  5. Katie Mia Frederick4 September 2013 at 00:54

    I suppose a monkey could have a good laugh at a human if a monkey was so inclined to worry about something other than living...smiles..I loved your poem...

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  6. Dorianna (paintswithwords.com5 September 2013 at 03:55

    true that..stress of urban life..amusing read but one with a good message

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  7. Dorianna (paintswithwords.com12 September 2013 at 06:41

    wonderful satirical end to drive home just how 'civilized' we humans really are ""_~

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