My dairy walk with nature
Bridging the river of thoughts
With structured wide to hang
On a foggy day with boats
From the land of river where fish stocks
Are grabbed on nets of men
I would call yee
Windsor, windor thy bridge
Man made as barrrier to tame nature
Solemn walk with one's thought
The foggs in the day near this river
Hides one's thought from all
awesome write! love the two last line...
ReplyDeletei hope i can have those fog too, to hide the sadness i have for the past days... my confusing thoughts!...
JJRod'z
Bridging the river of thoughts
ReplyDeleteWith structured wide to hang
I love these lines
the fogs hides everything but sadness
ReplyDeleteunder windsor bridge senryu
Walking in the fog leaves one nothing to look at but one's own thoughts, I guess.
ReplyDeleteis it a dairy walk or daily walk? Regardless this is lovely to read.
ReplyDeleteI love the word 'solemn' which captures the nature of a foggy morning so succinctly, Kodjo. Thank you for sharing these soft reflections. =D
ReplyDeleteVery nice, and it's so true sometimes our thoughts are better off hidden! Sometimes!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done. I love the last two lines and I can so relate.
ReplyDeleteMine is here
Have you a ROCKING AND WEEK!!!
hugs
shakira