My pond shall be full of flowers
Yes as blue, as blue, with blue
I could muddy my pond, if stretched to
I have what it takes, I have always had
Settled beneath with many a story sediments
I could muddy my pond with mud
But such times are long gone
So my pond shall be of blue, yes as blue
With flowers full, varied and plenty
My pond shall be as blue
With leaves of yellow as is with maturity
With leaves of green as is with continuity
My pond shall be of blue, so blue
Yes as blue, with blue, as blue
I love the repetition of blue.
ReplyDeleteGreat line...the blue..i agree with brenda
ReplyDeleteinteresting voice in this...making it muddy yet knowing it should be blue....
ReplyDeleteContrast of mud and flowers I'm fond of, but the dichotomy flows elegantly off the screen with this insistence of "blue".
ReplyDeleteI have to admitt that i just used that blue line (twisted it with my own voice) thank you for the inspiration
ReplyDeletehttp://poemadaypoet.blogspot.com/2012/07/airline-fantasies.html
"Nel blu dipinto di blu..."
ReplyDeleteNice....the leaves and their colors are beautifully said....
ReplyDeleteI too love the repetition of blue and the flowers floating.
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