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Sunday 7 October 2012

Breathe Easy


Breathe easy and not in  haste 
Hastily you might breathe a chunk and choke 

 The air is full of such particles to avoid 
Attracted by the eagerness of haste 

 Time out, if all seems so overwhelming 
Time is only but  a passage path 

 The routes are different 
All with their own angles 

 Ask the man with a rush down the road 
How he got his rushes 

 Breathe easy and not in a haste 
Hastily you might breathe a chunk and choke 
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Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 11:06
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4 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue Sky7 October 2012 at 15:35

    The repeating lines work well to bring this poem full circle.....

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  2. Gordon G7 October 2012 at 21:49

    I love this poem! It brings 'breath in breath out' to a whole deeper level. Very calming and zen-like

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  3. Sarav8 October 2012 at 02:33

    Love that ask a man with a rush, how he got his rushes! Very clever poem.

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  4. Matthew John Davies12 October 2012 at 08:22

    I like this stilted wording, Kodjo.

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