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Tuesday, 26 October 2010

Burning Desire

Amnesia of the pain,
Comes at the aftermath 
Of the walks in deserts 


And I am tongue tied, 
Like the silence felt 
In spilt seconds before impact 


The forest woods 
Are thick with hedges, 
Scratch marks, lay siege on flesh


Edged on, road's paths
By that burning desire 
An antidote to the pain felt


The fields lie in wait, of pasturers 
Past, the obstacle course drawn
Destiny lies in different strokes...


And this is my burning desire
My saviour parie 
My burning desire 
Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 23:42
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6 comments:

  1. SuziCate26 October 2010 at 23:52

    And I am tongue tied,
    Like the silence felt
    In spilt seconds before impact - love that verse

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  2. KB28 October 2010 at 08:17

    A beautiful write.

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  3. Anonymous28 October 2010 at 13:11

    A rich exploration of experience. Memorable. - bill

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  4. TALON28 October 2010 at 16:12

    I love the idea of the burning desire cancelling pain - I like that so much!

    There was a softness in this that I really enjoyed.

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall10 January 2011 at 16:10

    vivid imagery.

    smart sentiments...

    A++

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  6. Anonymous11 January 2011 at 18:40

    Thanks for the lovely participation, Happy Tuesday!

    Potluck Week 17 Treat/Awards 4 You, Enjoy!

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