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Sunday, 21 November 2010

Carnival Prayers

I want to write a poem of words 
That start with a notion 
Inscribed on emotion


Pen my ink, with fantasy, day dream 
Set my imagination on wishful thinking
Buy a book, write a book, of dairy pages


Plan a plan of scope to see forth 
Build my self a prince's castle, 
On top of canyon mountain stands


Place a beautiful princess inside 
To be my queen, my all, my other half 
To fill the canyon's holes, left wide gapped


I want to write a poem of words
Set it out, in hope, in wish, like a prayer 
To have my dreams come true to light


While I stand on high, on joy 
Over wishful stands on canyons lands, 
Where dreams are made to fill this gap 


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12 comments:

  1. That's what that photo is like - a prayer. Nice one, sir.

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  2. Very nice poem, indeed... I would say you were successful in this, writing it 'in hope, in wish, like a prayer'.

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  3. "I want to write a poem of words
    Set it out, in hope, in wish, like a prayer
    To have my dreams come true to light"

    Lovely sentiments - unique build off of the photo. Such fantastical yet simple longing, with such an image as the backdrop...

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  4. Fantastic poem that reminds me of both writing and spirituality. Great work. Creative use of the prompt as well. Cheers

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  5. Very good poem. You've personalized the metaphor beautifully.

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  6. I am loving all the different takes on this prompt, this week. Your poem is lovely. I hope all your dreams come true.

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  7. Romantic and personal, but light and positive, full of the feeling of that open blue sky in the photo. Liked it very much.

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  8. love it, a prayer in a poem... even just looking at this panoramic is like a prayer - a breath of fresh air providing space for new potentials to come in

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  9. so lovely ~ full of positive ~ and those castles ~ would I be a Princess in one such scene ~
    beautiful
    ~ Lib ~

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  10. Its so beautiful it brings tears to the eyes..your princess is one lucky woman

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  11. your poem speaks directly to the heart :)

    keep dreaming :)

    thanks for visiting my place

    cheers from Uruguay :)

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