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Tuesday, 23 November 2010

My Pin Up

We look out to see 
What crystal balls hold   
And we day dream over  utopia 

It is better that way, leisure away 
Time so precious, indulging   
On alternate universe

My pin up girl  
Like the stars afar  
In the distance of the heavens 

Set as background  drop
For your spectacles of beauty  
But do not transform into flesh  

For with that, in reality 
I will come to know your imperfections 
Your weakness, your darkness 

Be forever in my desire  
Please do not come close  
Your star nearing earth to have gravity 

Spare me the reality of your actuality  
Allow me, to just day dream of your perfection  
A fine figment of my imagination  

Stay lined, aligned in parallel worlds   
Be Hollywood, be glitter, starstruck      
Allow me to day dream, my pin up girl 
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  1. Love the poem and love the picture. This had to be my favorite verse.

    Spare me the reality of your actuality,
    Allow me, to just day dream,
    Just a figment of my imagination

    Thnak you for sharing.

  2. thus was a really good read...thanks for sharing with OSW...pete

  3. dreams come true are the best of all... and they never disappoint if we welcome them as they are :)

  4. I love to lose myself in my imagination, it's a great place to be. Well expressed and penned.


  5. "Be Hollywood" That is my favorite line in this lovely poem. It says so much about dreaming.

    Lovely picture too.

  6. Hi Kodjo...this is a beautiful poem....so many wonderful lines...glad i found you here...thank you for visiting mine. :-)

  7. Love the line "Spare me the reality of your actuality." Excellent use of the image. Enjoy reading your work. Cheers

  8. Dear Kodjo

    Very interesting.. I enjoyed it.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  9. the imagery is breath taking here.
    Thanks for linking...


  10. Very insightful, Kodjo. Sometimes the closer we get, the less thrilling it becomes. On the other hand...

  11. Wise words, lest we get too close and blur the visions created from afar.


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