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Monday, 16 April 2012

Crimson's painful rain


Just as the winds blow and we all breathe air 
Can the pain of one, infect a whole community 
Like a disease of melancholy and sadness 

And see red painted on all roads and houses, walls and roofs 
Like rain of blood poured into rivers and on people too 
To make dead all the fishes that swim 

Can the hurt of one, the cut  
Bring to the brink and see the departing of lovers 
With bouquet discarded without care 

And the spirit of love to run fast  
Faster on chariot to escape cupid 
And have the soul fall in oblivion from lack of feed 

Can crimson be darker than black 
And have black be the corner stone 
That stands guard between pain and greenery 

Yet if the sun would shine bright yellow on us 
And the pink cousin of red would dilute the intensity of cuts 
Like anointment on an angel's head in a circular glow  

The rage and destruction of crimsons pain would quell 
And we would replant what seeds, were kept safe in blue box 
To have a future to come back to, if we are lucky  



19 comments:

  1. lovely poem. i especially love the last verse.

    "The rage and destruction of red's pain will quell
    And we will replant, what seeds were kept safe in blue box
    To have a future to come back to, if we are lucky"

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  2. Red and Black often travel as close companions, i think .

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  3. Thoughtful and hopeful.

    Nice one.

    =)

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  4. So much depends on those germinating seeds!

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  5. I love the notion of pink being a cousin of red...beautiful write...

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  6. "can crimson seem darker than black"-- love that image. Very nice poem.

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