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Sunday, 5 December 2010

Oh Heavens!

Her touch,
A feel,
Silk, like cashmere


Emotions drawn
And man is transformed
By nature, her calling


A trance of excitement
Her touch, her feel
Eyes closed; Oh, heavens!

Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 08:37
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21 comments:

  1. Claudia5 December 2010 at 13:11

    oh, heavens....and man is transformed..so beautiful...

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  2. Wysteria5 December 2010 at 14:19

    Great poem with the prompt. Well done!

    Wysteria

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  3. dustus5 December 2010 at 14:28

    Wonderful work with the prompt... Great title and "Emotions drawn / A man transformed" well said. Fine poem.

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  4. Helena Malheur5 December 2010 at 14:55

    ooh, lovely poem. the second stanza is my favorite and the last line -- perfect!

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  5. hedgewitch5 December 2010 at 15:04

    Nice tension and images of abandonment to the calling of nature. Gets the feel of the pic well.

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  6. Another Man's Dream5 December 2010 at 15:24

    oh heavens! - now I am truly envious of this pic and your words :)

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  7. Anita Magdalena5 December 2010 at 15:27

    Well expressed, the depth of emotion.

    Anita.

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  8. Reflections5 December 2010 at 15:28

    Beautiful transformations within your words... oh heavens...

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  9. Jerry5 December 2010 at 15:45

    a transformation of a man...oh the power of nature...of a woman...oh heavens ditto infinity.

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  10. Anonymous5 December 2010 at 16:07

    "A feel, silk like cashmere" <~~gorgeous ~April

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  11. Louise Gallagher5 December 2010 at 17:30

    Oh heavens indeed!

    Very nicely done.

    Louise G

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  12. batsick5 December 2010 at 17:44

    Oh heavens! What a great poem. Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/12/dreams-are-never-eternal.html

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  13. Anonymous5 December 2010 at 18:54

    Made me go weak at the knees to Kodjo! Lovely write.

    Shan
    @awdures

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  14. Desert Rose5 December 2010 at 19:58

    Her touch,
    A feel,
    Silk, like cashmere

    great use of the feel of texture, deep poem! great write Kodjo!

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  15. Beachanny5 December 2010 at 20:25

    Transformed, transported...in silk cashmere to places exotic, uncharted. Well done.

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  16. Bernadine5 December 2010 at 21:01

    beautiful words, such a wonderful transformation, I'm sure for both. :) Lovely poem

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  17. Maude Lynn5 December 2010 at 23:19

    Excellent!

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  18. Anonymous6 December 2010 at 00:21

    heartfelt emotions.
    lovely done.

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  19. Brother Ollie8 December 2010 at 12:57

    Thanks for your kind words. I read some of your work - you got a great flow.

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  20. Marbles in My Pocket15 August 2011 at 15:41

    Oh, yes! Great writing. A well painted scene!

    Here is my offering for Potluck 48: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/14/the-lake/

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  21. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall18 August 2011 at 18:05

    hot, well done.

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