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Tuesday, 1 March 2011

So Many Words (Free verse)

Save(d) the bell, by the bell, saved by the bell
So many words said like rampage
Run this, you hear this, you heard that 
I'm all ears, that's what I am saying now
I am all ears, one shot, here shoot 


So teach and lecture, poetry 
Desk chair, I'm sat on 
Tables in front of me
Finger print pushed on lemons
For lemonade, its a process
Re-stressed, compression 


Ready to pen down wisdom
A drink, I drink after, whole cups after
I am thirsty for the know 
Intellect, intelligence
Gather like harvest 


I'm yearning 
Give me the vibe right 
The oomph tight 
The words bright 


But now my patience gauge 
Slowly moving to rage 
I'm furious, delirious 
This is miseducation on misinformation  


Rest assured, please believe 
You will be fired, through the exit polls 
After this, after me, after I, take on the stage
Grab the floor, own the place, make it mine to ride


Raid you off, I'm about to set the stage right 
Fast, past mediocrity, 
Stamping on egg shell
Flour smoke whisker, like ninja, appearance 


You've got me all wound up 
Why is this, why is that, 
Ovens with half baked cakes 
Middles on the sloping ends, served


Now am just fuming 
Like steam of the rage train 
Hear me, watch me, about to deliver
Projected words, chant hallelujah  from wisdom


Note: This is like shaping pencils 
Doodling on empty paper, from empty mind
Otherwise known as, scribbling on snakes and ladders




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16 comments:

  1. "doodling on empty paper" kind of like a free write?

    anyway, I get your point. I like the phrase "miss-education."

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  2. This was quite a ride! Filled with energy and creativity. Nicely done.

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  3. Oh my goodness! Felt like a a manic fight of thoughts and ideas. Wow!

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  4. i want some of what you are having...that was fun wasnt it...it sounds fun...nice bit of play...

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  5. Flour smoke whisker? I love it!

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  6. I love how you make your own rules in this poem. It was an absolute pleasure to read, flowed so smooth and said so much, well done.

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  7. Love this, kind of free verse, rambling, roaming, place to place, all with splendid colors.

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  8. ...scribbling on snakes and ladders..smiles..esp. liked..Finger print pushed on lemons
    For lemonade, its a process... it is...

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  9. Hey Bro,

    fewer words/ and way more juice/ that's what I see/ that's what i deduce.

    Tiger

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  10. Seriously, if this doodling, then I am already beginning to feel ashamed of what I write (in the name of poetry)...

    This was friggin' AWESOME!!
    "scribbling on snakes and ladders" -- loved that phrase! You have such a creative mind, Kodjo....
    Stay thus, my friend..

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  11. Message-intense, focused work.

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  12. Hi Kodjo

    Great free flow.... and your words like ...
    'For lemonade, its a process
    Re-stressed, compression '
    were true to the process... I enjoyed it

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-winter-dew.html
    Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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  13. :) I love the beat, the passion, the ride!
    Cheers
    Padmavani

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  14. Ready to pen down wisdom
    A drink, I drink after, whole cups after
    I am thirsty for the know
    Intellect, intelligence
    Gather like harvest

    this is my favorite stanza... so much energy...nice write...bkm

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