Editor

For any editorial feedback on this website email me on: kodjodeynoo@gmail.com

Site Statistics

1,220 Literature Posts. 5,410 plus Individual Comments..300,000 plus web site Hits..715 Individual Members. Be a part of the movement, click and join this site. I appreciate my followers and they get a pride of place on this site.

Please support and join this blog

Networkblogs

Saturday, 12 May 2012

Lovers Mask


Take down the mask worn 
Let me see you, as thou stands  
Take down the hide love 

10 comments:

  1. Lovely haiku ~ ... let me see as thou stands.. well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

    ReplyDelete
  2. Although, at times a challenge, we should all speak our truth -- and show ourselves as we are!
    Pink Sandpaper

    ReplyDelete
  3. Very cool picture... the "thou" you threw in there made me do a double take

    ReplyDelete
  4. Great picture to compliment a lovely haiku!

    ReplyDelete
  5. Great picture complimenting lovely haiku!

    ReplyDelete
  6. Beautiful haiku with beautiful picture!

    ReplyDelete
  7. Lovely, especially the second line.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Honestly, gotta say the flow was stilted with the "thou"...but concept is great

    ReplyDelete
  9. This is really a nice haiku. So intense and full of romance. I love to invite and introduce to you my new haiku meme "Tackle It Tuesday". It's open for new entries 'till next monday.

    http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/05/tackle-it-tuesday-day-2-magnolia.html

    ReplyDelete

Related Posts Plugin for WordPress, Blogger...
There was an error in this gadget
There was an error in this gadget