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Saturday 12 May 2012

Lovers Mask


Take down the mask worn 
Let me see you, as thou stands  
Take down the hide love 
Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 14:55
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10 comments:

  1. carol l mckenna12 May 2012 at 15:12

    Lovely haiku ~ ... let me see as thou stands.. well crafted ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  2. Anonymous12 May 2012 at 19:17

    Although, at times a challenge, we should all speak our truth -- and show ourselves as we are!
    Pink Sandpaper

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  3. Frank Watson13 May 2012 at 04:45

    Very cool picture... the "thou" you threw in there made me do a double take

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  4. Jaideep Rao14 May 2012 at 05:23

    Great picture to compliment a lovely haiku!

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  5. Jaideep Rao14 May 2012 at 05:24

    Great picture complimenting lovely haiku!

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  6. Pranita14 May 2012 at 05:37

    Brilliant!!! Very lovely haiku
    Truth likes to travel bare feet
    Live once and for all

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  7. Sri Valli14 May 2012 at 16:56

    Beautiful haiku with beautiful picture!

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  8. PattiKen14 May 2012 at 18:45

    Lovely, especially the second line.

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  9. joanne14 May 2012 at 20:03

    Honestly, gotta say the flow was stilted with the "thou"...but concept is great

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  10. Chèvrefeuille18 May 2012 at 12:33

    This is really a nice haiku. So intense and full of romance. I love to invite and introduce to you my new haiku meme "Tackle It Tuesday". It's open for new entries 'till next monday.

    http://chevrefeuilleshaikublog.blogspot.com/2012/05/tackle-it-tuesday-day-2-magnolia.html

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