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Friday, 26 August 2011

Father Of Venus



Her Father, my Mother  
Who is to be blamed  in blame games
For expectation, setting standards  
To be kept, to be matched  


I blame her father, she blames my mother  
It is not Mars or Venus that holds blame tags 
To be renamed,  pointing fingures in blame game named  


Her father is Venus and my mother is Mars   
She moulded Mars, my mother did  
 For a man to be who I am 


I blame her father   
Fathering her love and expectation 
Mr Venus setting standards bars soo high 


I blame her father she blames my mother  
Now we are playing catch up, learning fast  
From rule books, discovery of unwritten love manual

That women are from fatherly Venus 
And men are from motherly Mars 
I bet you didn't think of it this way 
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9 comments:

  1. Please help me for Christ sake

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  2. Very interesting and thought provoking.

    My poem: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/she-sat-alone-2/

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  3. well capture of the targeted sentiments.
    Cheers.

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  4. The blame game never works. Nice poem about the futility of it all.

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  5. A creative look at our history... we actually have the best of both our fathers and mothers.

    Happy day ~

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  6. Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
    Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!

    It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!

    Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/

    some of my Haiku Collections
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/

    and also, on my very recent Work as well
    http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/

    !!! Happy Rally !!!
    Cheers !!

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  7. Sounds like the honeymoon has come to an end. Nicely done.

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  8. So great and your honeymoon has ended too bad it could not go on forever. Happy rally and my entry this first rally for me is http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/01/life-memories/

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  9. Ha-ha! Where's the like button? This is great stuff.

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