It is like the darkness of winter
Teddy bears laid cold on street corners, comatose to dead
Teddy bears laid cold on street corners, comatose to dead
Flowers beside, letters on walls and faded messages
Hollow grounds, on walk ways depicted, clap! just the one sound
This is a story rooted from summer’s day, long gone
Empty bottles, cold snow infested sites, with frost
Ink melting off paper backs
Faded names on graffiti walls and messages lost
Faded names on graffiti walls and messages lost
This day started long on a summer’s day
Graduation stages set, another name called
Awaiting a turn on the ceremony of tears
How many; a face of the unknown to have turned up
How many; a face of the unknown to have turned up
On my graduation, a crowd might gather
This is the only time, if I am lucky to see care
I would never have this much attention on focus
I would never have this much attention on focus
And teddy bears would lie cold, on streets on winter’s day
Before is gone, all in silence, with breath I took
Before is time of yesterday, with it's passage, my will to opt
This was my graduation on a summer’s day
On here, where I stood, this here my last call
On here, where I stood, this here my last call
Nobody looks no more at teddy bears lay, "no crips, no bloods"
The flowers are all, but without life, dark
Faded writing on pages and empty bottles of Hennessey
Hold hollowness of my graduation turn
Hold hollowness of my graduation turn
Gone is the voice of my time, this is my graduation
Somebody clapped, a mother's son gone and I had a graduation
With writings on the walls, this is me sat at "rose cottages" wrinkled roses Teddy bears, faded messages left, winter absorbs inks from writing
What a shocking but brillant piece of work!
ReplyDeleteReally pulled no punches, a wonderful verse and sad but true look at street crime.
ReplyDeletethe teddy bears lying cold on the street corners is such a image, nicely done...i dunno i think we leave behind too much of our childhood at graduation...
ReplyDeleteshocking and sad, the mention of the teddy bears brought tears to my eyes...good piece of a social commentary poem kodjo..
ReplyDeleteMan, I really like this. You've got the sound down of a lament that tears off the surface of apathy and reveals real heart and real soul. I might've chosen different words here or there, but that's me. You stay real to yourself and the words will be yours, as they are here. Real and beautiful.
ReplyDeletestriking lines.
ReplyDeletelovely job.
graphic!! emotional!!
ReplyDeletegreat piece