I get them, funny giggle
That is you, my happy trigger
Dancing formation dance in pair
Synchronised like two dolphins
Playing their hearts out, affection gained
The blue sea is wide and treasures filled
Lets treasure hunt, it is your love I seek
And for us the whole platform to stand
You smile with a sparkle, shimmering stars
Treasures bright your eyes hold belong
I love it so, forever you twinkle
I love to tell a joke or two,
Three if I am on a row, always on the row
Pull silly faces and tickle your happy spot
Just to see all the treasures, your eyes do hide
I know you will laugh, at my silly jokes
You get me, my punch line, right, ha ha ha
I get you too, I so much do
Always with the twinkle in your eyes
I love to see the twinkle in your eyes
Laughing loving laughing out loud
"Little I ask, my wants are few"
Just to see the twinkle in your eyes
Sharing laughter is such a wonderful thing to do. You've captured the feeling so well here.
ReplyDeletesmiles. this is a delight the laughter and love...playfulness between spouses and loves is essential...
ReplyDeletea very joyous poem! great celebration of love
ReplyDeletePoetry is often so heavy (at least mine is!) and so I really enjoyed this light poem about a couple laughing together as they dance. Refreshing!
ReplyDeletePhew, sounds like love!
ReplyDeleteThere is nothing quite and like love and friendship, and having the pleasure of sharing it with someone...
ReplyDeleteThis poem, to me, was all about simplicity and naturalness... and I loved it!!
Hi Kodjo...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the simplicity of your verse... so soft and lovely...
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/07/whispers-cuckoos-song-and-smell-of-love.html
"Just to see the twinkle in your eyes"
ReplyDeleteone of the most delightful sights to see on a loved one's face!
i really like this! ♥
it's a pleasure to read all the love and laughter :)
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