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Sunday, 31 July 2011

Love In Words



If I stand close enough, a' I look into your eyes 
I can see the world in your eyes  
And where between stories I belong   


Like road maps between stories   
Where I come in to play my part
In your life stories told   


In your dreams, in your making   
Next to you, hand in hand, forever  
Wiping your tears, sharing your smiles   


Making avenues for future plans   
All in the twinkle of your eyes   
Like a view in a snow globe, hold   


If I stand close enough 
I can explain the perplexed mystery 
That surrounds the feeling we have 

If I stand close enough, just close enough
I can ease your daunting anticipation
And explain with acts, how love holds 


If I stand close enough 
Just close enough, I can tell you
How much I love you
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Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 09:30
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20 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall31 July 2011 at 22:57

    awesome entry,

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  2. Anonymous31 July 2011 at 23:48

    A lot of deep emotion. Like you simply can't get it all out.

    I enjoyed this.

    -H

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  3. Roan1 August 2011 at 13:02

    ...hand in hand forever. Wonderful poem.

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  4. Brian Miller8 August 2011 at 13:53

    if you can explain that mystery you are better than i...love is a most powerful and mysterious thing...this has a great warm feeling to it...

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  5. Erratic Thoughts10 August 2011 at 08:01

    Such warmth of love in your piece..Loved it!

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  6. Zoe13 August 2011 at 13:24

    This is a very touching take on the prompt. Very delicate, tenuous but deliberate. Love it!

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  7. Donna B.14 August 2011 at 17:41

    Someone is madly in love!

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  8. Wendy13 September 2011 at 10:50

    My husband says sometimes - that he wishs he could just hug me inside - he just wants to get close enough. Love this poem, Wendy.

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  9. keiths ramblings14 September 2011 at 01:14

    Wow, this is brilliant. Touching, moving and so well written. Love it.

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  10. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry16 September 2011 at 00:15

    how sweet.

    love the passion in it.

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  11. Claudia8 December 2011 at 20:22

    love the snow globe as an image here.. displays tiny bits and pieces of that magic that wraps around love..

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  12. Anonymous8 December 2011 at 21:28

    sometimes, you can't even stand close enough, but i guess that's when someone tells you not to be so needy.

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  13. Anonymous8 December 2011 at 22:13

    Love in Words display the passions within (holding)
    I love the lines (especially)
    ''If I stand close enough, just close enough
    I can ease your daunting anticipation
    And explain with acts, what love holds ''

    lovely piece.

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  14. Brian Miller8 December 2011 at 22:18

    nice...knew i had read this before...thanks for the trip back for dverse meeting the bar today..

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  15. Anonymous8 December 2011 at 22:38

    If I stand close enough, when I look into your eye
    I can see the world in your eyes
    And where between stories I belong

    Personally, I would leave "when I look into your eye" out of it completely, so it would begin,

    If I stand close enough,
    I can see the world in your eyes
    And where between stories I belong

    That's the way you end this piece and I think that feels right.

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  16. Victoria9 December 2011 at 03:43

    I like that place "between stories." Your choice of images complements the poem..it looks like a Hopper, right?

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  17. Cathy Feaster9 December 2011 at 16:43

    this is rather sweet :)

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  18. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry11 December 2011 at 00:43

    sweet.

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