I can see the world in your eyes
And where between stories I belong
Like road maps between stories
Where I come in to play my part
In your life stories told
In your dreams, in your making
Next to you, hand in hand, forever
Wiping your tears, sharing your smiles
Making avenues for future plans
All in the twinkle of your eyes
Like a view in a snow globe, hold
If I stand close enough
I can explain the perplexed mystery
That surrounds the feeling we have
If I stand close enough, just close enough
I can ease your daunting anticipation
And explain with acts, how love holds
If I stand close enough
Just close enough, I can tell you
How much I love you
awesome entry,
ReplyDeleteA lot of deep emotion. Like you simply can't get it all out.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this.
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...hand in hand forever. Wonderful poem.
ReplyDeleteif you can explain that mystery you are better than i...love is a most powerful and mysterious thing...this has a great warm feeling to it...
ReplyDeleteSuch warmth of love in your piece..Loved it!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very touching take on the prompt. Very delicate, tenuous but deliberate. Love it!
ReplyDeleteSomeone is madly in love!
ReplyDeleteMy husband says sometimes - that he wishs he could just hug me inside - he just wants to get close enough. Love this poem, Wendy.
ReplyDeleteWow, this is brilliant. Touching, moving and so well written. Love it.
ReplyDeletehow sweet.
ReplyDeletelove the passion in it.
love the snow globe as an image here.. displays tiny bits and pieces of that magic that wraps around love..
ReplyDeletesometimes, you can't even stand close enough, but i guess that's when someone tells you not to be so needy.
ReplyDeleteLove in Words display the passions within (holding)
ReplyDeleteI love the lines (especially)
''If I stand close enough, just close enough
I can ease your daunting anticipation
And explain with acts, what love holds ''
lovely piece.
nice...knew i had read this before...thanks for the trip back for dverse meeting the bar today..
ReplyDeleteIf I stand close enough, when I look into your eye
ReplyDeleteI can see the world in your eyes
And where between stories I belong
Personally, I would leave "when I look into your eye" out of it completely, so it would begin,
If I stand close enough,
I can see the world in your eyes
And where between stories I belong
That's the way you end this piece and I think that feels right.
I like that place "between stories." Your choice of images complements the poem..it looks like a Hopper, right?
ReplyDeletethis is rather sweet :)
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