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Sunday 24 July 2011

Stranger's Knock

When a friend comes to my humble abode  
We celebrate with open arms  
To appreciate the love they bring  


When a friend comes knocking  
Darkness is  without shadows   
My door way lights bright   


And you will be greeted with open arms   
To gladly share, my sugar with, stories with  
Of what in script of your journey I have missed  


When a friend leaves to voyage on journey  
Half the moon goes with her   
Like a half locket we shared   


His and hers until we meet again   
To unify the bond we have   
And her presence, brightens my door ways always  
Posted by Kodjo Deynoo at 08:46
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6 comments:

  1. Anonymous25 July 2011 at 11:42

    Nicely written piece :)

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  2. Marbles in My Pocket25 July 2011 at 12:43

    The line "half the moon goes with her" struck a cord with me. I see two friends looking up at the same moon from distant, different, places. Nicely done!

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  3. Anonymous25 July 2011 at 14:32

    I like it. Friendship is hard to come by.

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  4. Mike Patrick25 July 2011 at 15:34

    I'm with Marbles. The lines with "half the moon" and "darkness is without shadows" resonated with me. Nicely done.

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  5. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall26 July 2011 at 03:28

    sharp, long live friendship.

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  6. Fountains27 July 2011 at 01:10

    "Half the moon goes with her, like a half locket we shared" - wonderful.

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