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Monday, 4 July 2011

Take Me Away


Poem By: Dzisam Elikem 

Doesn't make sense  
how the lens sees presence  
why defenses flee from offence    
when a second is fated chance  
and meaning looses its stance  

Why I stare into distance   
whiles she turns in a dance  
what a dunce I've become  
Am I blind or overcome  

Take me away  
anywhere anytime lets go away  
perhaps my heart will be gay  
I'll probably fly away  
in this dilema i'll find a way  
until then just take me away  

You are beautiful  
your kind is in extinction  
nector sweet rendition  
tomorrow is unsure  
but for now... take me away  

5 comments:

  1. This is lovely - it reminds me of something but I can't place it right now.

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  2. I absolutely love the first two verses, great lines to a lovely poem...am taken away.

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  3. Nicely worded request, a man seeking not to understand but to live in the moment, I like that :)

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  4. Beautiful poem, I really enjoy the atmosphere you've created

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  5. its a beautiful poem i love the last stanza

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