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Monday, 4 July 2011

Take Me Away

Poem By: Dzisam Elikem 

Doesn't make sense  
how the lens sees presence  
why defenses flee from offence    
when a second is fated chance  
and meaning looses its stance  

Why I stare into distance   
whiles she turns in a dance  
what a dunce I've become  
Am I blind or overcome  

Take me away  
anywhere anytime lets go away  
perhaps my heart will be gay  
I'll probably fly away  
in this dilema i'll find a way  
until then just take me away  

You are beautiful  
your kind is in extinction  
nector sweet rendition  
tomorrow is unsure  
but for now... take me away  


  1. This is lovely - it reminds me of something but I can't place it right now.

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  2. I absolutely love the first two verses, great lines to a lovely poem...am taken away.

  3. Nicely worded request, a man seeking not to understand but to live in the moment, I like that :)

  4. Beautiful poem, I really enjoy the atmosphere you've created

  5. its a beautiful poem i love the last stanza


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