Doesn't make sense
how the lens sees presence
why defenses flee from offence
when a second is fated chance
and meaning looses its stance
Why I stare into distance
whiles she turns in a dance
what a dunce I've become
Am I blind or overcome
Take me away
anywhere anytime lets go away
perhaps my heart will be gay
I'll probably fly away
in this dilema i'll find a way
until then just take me away
You are beautiful
your kind is in extinction
nector sweet rendition
tomorrow is unsure
but for now... take me away
This is lovely - it reminds me of something but I can't place it right now.
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I absolutely love the first two verses, great lines to a lovely poem...am taken away.
ReplyDeleteNicely worded request, a man seeking not to understand but to live in the moment, I like that :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem, I really enjoy the atmosphere you've created
ReplyDeleteits a beautiful poem i love the last stanza
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