Others call it, the calm down
Days after the before
And during the act "se fini "
Valentine came with it's entourage
Cupid hanged in toe, tagged along
Jumping on high, like bunny rabbits on heat
Afrodisiac caused by chocolates and red wine
The climax, roses on floors, cherry popped
Love has a physical side
So now mid week, mind me say into week end
Like hang over, take over
Reality and its day to day activities
Utopia is replaced by the boring
Someone knocked on my door
He plays the violin
Bubble burst in sudden motion
Eyes without see to show empathy
Like men in black, Darth Vader in suits
Heart beats with fear,
Sudden loss of self
Oh mine that is the baliff
I like the line "Valentine came with it's entourage" - sounds like the rest of the week was a bit of a come down.
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Hope to see you next week. :-)
Although your week prompted the blues, this was brilliant, especially when read aloud.
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ReplyDeleteDarth Vader is coming to arrest you? lol Love it. The more I think about it, a fitting way to describe a post-Valentines day hangover recovery. Very creative (excuse deleted comment-early morning typos). Appreciate you supporting these challenges, Kodjo!
ReplyDeleteha - i like how you manage to link darth vader to valentine...bluesy..smiles
ReplyDeleteVader Valentine...Very vortex.
ReplyDeleteHehee I'm hiding from the vader right now! Great humorous take! Loved it
ReplyDeleteLove the fifth stanza, enjoyed the others, as well. Good, fun read.
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