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Saturday, 19 February 2011

The Blues

The blues
Others call it, the calm down
Days after the before 
And during the act "se fini "


Valentine came with it's entourage
Cupid hanged in toe, tagged along
Jumping on high, like bunny rabbits on heat


Afrodisiac caused by chocolates and  red wine
The climax, roses on floors, cherry popped
Love has a physical side


So  now  mid week, mind me say into week end
Like hang over, take over
Reality and its day to day activities


Utopia is replaced by the boring 
Someone knocked on my door
He plays the violin 


Bubble burst in sudden motion 
Eyes without see to show empathy 
Like men in black, Darth Vader in suits


Heart beats with fear, 
Sudden loss of self 
Oh mine that is the baliff 

8 comments:

  1. I like the line "Valentine came with it's entourage" - sounds like the rest of the week was a bit of a come down.

    (is this the post you are linking to I Saw Sunday? It would be great if you could link back to there please.)

    Hope to see you next week. :-)

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  2. Although your week prompted the blues, this was brilliant, especially when read aloud.

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  4. Darth Vader is coming to arrest you? lol Love it. The more I think about it, a fitting way to describe a post-Valentines day hangover recovery. Very creative (excuse deleted comment-early morning typos). Appreciate you supporting these challenges, Kodjo!

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  5. ha - i like how you manage to link darth vader to valentine...bluesy..smiles

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  6. Vader Valentine...Very vortex.

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  7. Hehee I'm hiding from the vader right now! Great humorous take! Loved it

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  8. Love the fifth stanza, enjoyed the others, as well. Good, fun read.

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