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Tuesday, 15 February 2011

Needle and Hay Do, I Do

It's amazing, stood in maze fields puzzling
Marvelling, 6 million lives, do maths 
And I still found my own, do call it my own


To fit in puzzles of quest, 
Click inserted to where it belongs
It's amazing, really do pro-founding


Like finding  water wells in the middle of desolation
Deserted by the rains to quench my thirst
I am thirsty, starving shrinking, do thirst


My life line, heart monitor makes sounds 
Like blep, blep, blep, drum beats
Food is to feast gauge with do greed


Salt shakers 
Excite taste buds, any food, lust
Yum-yum, yummys on belly do full 


But for you my life line on tasted aqua
My dry lips shivers for your attention
To become my deity, do worship 


Said it's amazing,
Finding needles camouflaged in hay stack 
A few trails and errors on quest, do walked


Imitators on first to show hands 
Rectangles imitating squares, pentagon do circles
In the end,  fruitless, endless tries but truth be told, do tell


On rejected products, standard that are set
Still stands, ISO 9000 and the likes
So it's amazing, really  do pro-founding


How it came to be
Bestowed in existence
How quest found the heart's do tender


Shared with: Onestoppoetry http://onestoppoetry.com/
and Magpie Tales http://magpietales.blogspot.com/

Note: I got carried away with the "do" and couldn't do stop
So do read it with the do or without the do, do.. :)

8 comments:

  1. snort...do do...this has some fun flow and rhyme to it...particularly arounf the greed, full, worship stanzas

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  2. Nice one, Kodjo. I love "my dry lips shivers for your attention". Sexy.

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  3. oohh, very well done. Nice rhythm to this as well.

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  4. The picture made me think of Voo Doo
    delightful my friend you really are multi- talented in your writing.

    Thanks for the One Shot

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  5. Wow...wow and wow!! I, for some reason, read code in this!! It reminded of my programming days.. heheh
    While .. (...)
    Do... (...)

    Loved this poem.. tho "do" at the end of each stanza totally added to the effect, and was like the underlining or highlighting point!! Very original!! Too good!

    Do keep writing, my friend.. do do... (you a Nike fan ? ;-))

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  6. Hi Kodjo

    Its beautiful... and I enjoyed it very much.. specially the lines..
    'But for you my life line on tasted aqua
    My dry lips shivers for your attention
    To become my deity, do worship '
    Thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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