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Thursday, 10 February 2011

Love me, Squeeze me

The Battle of the sexes, spirals
Yes, no, No, yes, Adam, Eve
Here, there, There, here
Come, go, Go, come, quick now


Touch me, hold me, squeeze me
No not like that
Hold me, closer, call me, chase me
No not like that 


Wine me, dine me, tease me
No not like that
Flowers, roses, candles
No not like that 


Wait there, right there, ah, right there
Now you doing it right
Doing it right , just there 
And you doing it right 


Find me, say hi, hug me
No not like that
Write letters, love letters
No not like that


Us together, forever, apples
With dentures
Sat on the beach 
On a moonlight hour


Wait there, right there
Now you doing it right
Doing it right, just there 
And you doing it right 

Who let the snake in
I want it out
aaaah, out, right now


11 comments:

  1. Lilting poem and says a lot in simple words and short lines!!

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  2. Love is a battlefield, but a good one!

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  3. The back-and-forth between strengthens the ties that bind us to each other. Interesting piece, Kodjo!

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  4. I love it. Interesting take on love. The back and forth . Cool poem.

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  5. The rhythm of love and how it can be so connected and so aloof. I like you took a different take~

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  6. The whole gamut of a relationship caught in a few words. enjoyed it a lot.

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  7. The ebb and flow of love through time is a dance all its own. Great take on the prompt...:)

    Lynette
    Imagination Lane

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  8. It's hard but we all know it's worth it. Good job.

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  9. that's how we all are born out of the sin.
    grin.

    well done entry.

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