Being attached to umbilical cords
Like cobwebs claim of unused boots
Nettle nestled, wrapped up in silk
At a stage pass the tress-hold of deliverance
Chop chop, to be free of chop
Being freed from attachments
Contemplation puts worrying thoughts
On one's mind "public service" as so claimed
"What if", conjures up a role for itself "busy body"
Standing at the gate of guards to enforce
Exit and entry are just as hard to comprehend
A' conditioned habits, fight a good fight to stay "conditioned"
Like the coral reefs claim of sunken old ships
If not then Black Beard's chest of treasures
Would have freely floated, for the first passer by to own
And that would have been centuries ago
Long before metal detectors
Long before sonar radar
Time is precious, the watch marker swears to that effect
If he says, then it is, it must be thinkering
For he holds the key to wind its tock, clock
And rabbits know to chase carrots
Leaving sticks behind for dogs to play fetch with
Chasing sticks over bones, conditioned with old habits
They say you can't teach an old dog a new trick
So he is stack chasing his tail in circles
Being attached, like an umbilical cord
But in the same house of cards
The cat moves with ease, regardless
A' to a point holds more respect
A' mystery for being just that regardless
As one with less of a boundary "prison blocks" on constraint
A cat, with its own mind do make at any rate, free
nice...love the play at the end with the rabbits and dogs and what sets the cat apart...nice write...
ReplyDeletehey man...hope you are well..obviously been here before...saw you were doing NaPo...hope your 30 days go well...
DeleteYour poem has many striking images, the first stanza alone with its delicate traps of nettles and cobwebs and umbilical cords makes for good reading several times over. I enjoyed mulling the Black Beard's chest lines too, the way that you had folded time as though the coral instantly bogged the chest down.
ReplyDeleteA great write and the thoughts that tie it all is immensely powerful.
ReplyDeleteShashi
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Nice write...I love the play at the end ....
ReplyDeleteyou've expressed the mind cages we build continuously so perfectly!
ReplyDeleteWhat if conjures up a role for itself...LOVE this line in particular, but the piece in its entirety lends itself to much thought...a hard one to detach from ;) Fantastic write.
ReplyDeletewhat we're attached to...the circles we move at times and under which circumstances we can break free..great metaphors in this..
ReplyDeleteDidactic and employs so many vivid symbols..nice read
ReplyDeleteDidactic and packed with symbolism..nice read
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