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Friday 9 March 2012

My human condition



Exhaustion has got a grip on my human condition
My soul calls out on S.O.S. I will lie and burden sleep
For repatriation from t' front line, to sleep and be human again
Exhaustion has got a grip on my human condition

My blood is boiling, my heart is running, my head is spinning  
My eyes are popping, my soul calls out for repatriation
Exhaustion has got a grip on my human condition
My soul calls out on S.O.S. I will lie and burden sleep

Triolets prompt by dverse: http://dversepoets.com

3 comments:

  1. nice kodjo...to get off the front line even for a bit and feel human...i feel you man...

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  2. The long line lengths here, combined with the triolet form, make for an effective communication with the reader.

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  3. I agree with Sam. You made a telling comment on the meaning of fatigue. All in triolet form!

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